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  • Leisure time

  • It is generally accepted that the pace of modern life has increased and more people work longer hours.
  • We simply cannot spend our free time only by laying in bed or watching TV.
  • For a while watching TV may be enjoyable but it is not very fulfilling over a period of time.
    • Another, ofter unacknowledgeged consequence of modern life is how fast an activity can become boring for us.
    • For this reason, it is recommendable not to forget that doing something productive can also help to reduce stress.
    • In short, it its clearly desirable that we not only relax, but that we do something worthwile in our leisure time.
    • In my view, the best use of leisure time is to take care of the body and the brain meanwhile.
    • Here are two of the most profitable ways of spending leisure time: doing sport at the gym or learning languages.
    • There is less social cohesion now that there was previously but both activities help making the mind free from all the worries from the work.
    • There can be no doubt that you can’t continue thinking about the work tasks whether you work at some of these activities by your leisure time.
    • In short, it is cleary desirable that we not only relax but that we do something worthwile in our leisure time.
    • Clearly, if leisure time is to become previous to us, is important that it become really effective by the recovering.

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