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  • Environmental problems

  • Our world is constantly changing.
  • People have created new inventions with each passing day, changing the existence of humanity to be simpler, better, and more favorable for themselves.
    • However, there is something, that most of us do not want to take control of and alter and that is environmental pollution which happens because of people’s actions.
  • Thousands of marine creatures are dying because of water pollution because someone decides to dump waste in rivers or seas.
  • Debris goes to trickle into the water, reaches the vortex in the ocean, and stays there, accumulates, and forms a gyre.
    • Animals eat this garbage, thinking that it is food, and dying as an outcome.
    • The same occurs on the land.
    • People throw out garbage in certain places, which are called landfills, where waste is accrued and stored without being sorted, recycled, and destroyed, because of that a highly toxic harmful stew called leachate appears.
  • It harms not only soil and its inhabitants but also rivers, lakes, seas, and oceans, poisoning them with pollutants.
  • Anyway, my thinking is, the most important environmental problem is plastic.
    • Plastics are a wide range of synthetic or semi-synthetic materials, that use polymers as the main ingredient.
  • The plasticity during production makes it possible for plastic to be molded, extruded, or pressed into solid objects of various shapes, making it an adaptable material for many different uses.
  • On the one hand, it has some advantages, one of which is by using plastic people have made many types of comfortable items, which we use every day.
    • Nevertheless, there are disadvantages, which outweigh disadvantages.
    • First, plastic is one of the most non-biodegradable materials (degradable only after thousands of years) because its composition includes oil and gas that chemically bind their molecules together.
  • Second, plastic is the most common material produced by humanity because of its multifunctionality and usability.
    • Therefore, people most frequently use plastic objects, and hence, and they mostly throw them out.
    • Third, most of the users do not dump plastic waste in specific places created for that, which are called recycling containers.
    • If we throw away plastic in these containers, then the contents go to the refinery, a place, where plastic is recycled, and after, it may be used again.
  • Although these places exist, only some people use them.
    • These are the most significant issues with plastic, as a result environmental pollution rises, which I mentioned above.
  • From my standpoint, all environmental troubles appear because of people and their mindless attitude to nature.
  • Many of them just live without thinking about their harming of the surrounding world.
    • The little wrapper dumped on the land, do terrible damage to the earth.
    • Nevertheless, throwing a bottle out on the recycling container can help handle widespread pollution, which can soon destroy all life.

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  • Tiêu đề
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  • câu 2
    • People have created new inventions with each passing day, changing the existence of humanity to be simpler, better, and more favorable for themselves.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • However, there is something, that most of us do not want to take control of and alter and that is environmental pollution which happens because of people’s actions.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • However, there is something, that most of us do not want to take control of and alter and t. That is environmental pollution which happens because of people's actions.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • Thousands of marine creatures are dying because of water pollution because someone decides to dump waste in rivers or seas.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • Debris goes to trickle into the water, reaches the vortex in the ocean, and stays there, accumulates, and forms a gyre.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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    • People throw out garbage in certain places, which are called landfills, where waste is accrued and stored without being sorted, recycled, and destroyed, because of that a highly toxic harmful stew called leachate appears.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • People throw out garbage in certain places, which are called landfills, where waste is accrued and stored without being sorted, recycled, and destroyed, b. Because of that, a highly toxic harmful stew called leachate appears.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • It harms not only soil and its inhabitants but also rivers, lakes, seas, and oceans, poisoning them with pollutants.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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    • The plasticity during production makes it possible for plastic to be molded, extruded, or pressed into solid objects of various shapes, making it an adaptable material for many different uses.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • On the one hand, it has some advantages, one of which is by using plastic people have made many types of comfortable items, which we use every day.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
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    • First, plastic is one of the most non-biodegradable materials (degradable only after thousands of years) because its composition includes oil and gas that chemically bind their molecules together.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • First, plastic is one of the most non-biodegradable materials (but degradable only after thousands of years) because its composition includes oil and gas that chemically bind their molecules together.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15
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    • Second, plastic is the most common material produced by humanity because of its multifunctionality and usability.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16
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    • Therefore, people most frequently use plastic objects, and hence, and they mostly throw them out.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Therefore, people most frequently use plastic objects, and hence, and they mostly throw them outthese objects will eventually end up in the trash.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17
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    • Third, most of the users do not dump plastic waste in specific places created for that, which are called recycling containers.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Third, most of the users do not dump plastic waste in specific places created for thatfor plastics themselves, which are called recycling containers.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18
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    • If we throw away plastic in these containers, then the contents go to the refinery, a place, where plastic is recycled, and after, it may be used again.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • If we throw away plastic in these containers, then the contents go to the refinery, a place, where plastic is recycled, and after,wards it may be used again.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19
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    • These are the most significant issues with plastic, as a result environmental pollution rises, which I mentioned above.
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    • These are the most significant issues with plastic, as awhich results in rising environmental pollution rises, whichthat I mentioned above.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 21ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 21
  • câu 22
    • From my standpoint, all environmental troubles appear because of people and their mindless attitude to nature.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 22ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 22
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    • Nevertheless, throwing a bottle out on the recycling container can help handle widespread pollution, which can soon destroy all life.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Nevertheless, throwing a bottle out oin the recycling container can help handle widespread pollution, which can soon destroy all life.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 25ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 25