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• In the course, I want to learn a more systematic approach to my personal finances and become more conscious about my spendings and income.

• As well I hope to get familiar with the basic principles of personal investment strategy.

• I would love to understand financial and economical terms so I could easily comprehend other information about finances in general.

• For example, to dig deeper into the stock market I need to understand what recession, interest rate, yield curve, and yield-to-maturity mean.

• I want to gain knowledge about how micro and micro economy factors can affect our decision making regarding personal finances.

• According to the course syllabus, we also going to touch upon insurance and retirement planning.

• I definitely cannot rely on the state pension and need to consider a retirement plan myself.

• This will give me a sense of security.

• A sense that I have control over my life.

• While insurance, especially voluntary health insurance and voluntary life insurance, would give me a release that on the chance of my unemployment due to health problems or even accidental death such an event would not cause any financial inconvenience to my loved ones.

• It was tough for me to truly plan my budget, but now when it becomes more predictable I can finally make some personal financial planning in order to achieve my ambitious financial goals.