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    • In the course, I want to learn a more systematic approach to my personal finances and become more conscious about my spendings and income.
    • As well I hope to get familiar with the basic principles of personal investment strategy.
    • I would love to understand financial and economical terms so I could easily comprehend other information about finances in general.
    • For example, to dig deeper into the stock market I need to understand what recession, interest rate, yield curve, and yield-to-maturity mean.
    • I want to gain knowledge about how micro and micro economy factors can affect our decision making regarding personal finances.
    • According to the course syllabus, we also going to touch upon insurance and retirement planning.
    • I definitely cannot rely on the state pension and need to consider a retirement plan myself.
    • This will give me a sense of security.
    • A sense that I have control over my life.
    • While insurance, especially voluntary health insurance and voluntary life insurance, would give me a release that on the chance of my unemployment due to health problems or even accidental death such an event would not cause any financial inconvenience to my loved ones.
  • For most of my life, I was self-employed which meant that my income was unstable and depended on many factors.
    • It was tough for me to truly plan my budget, but now when it becomes more predictable I can finally make some personal financial planning in order to achieve my ambitious financial goals.

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    • In the course, I want to learn a more systematic approach to my personal finances and become more conscious about my spendings and income.
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    • In theis course, I want to learn a more systematic approach to my personal finances and become more conscious about my spendings and my income.
    • In theis course, I want to learn a more systematic approach to my personal finances and become more conscious about my spendings and income.
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    • For example, to dig deeper into the stock market I need to understand what recession, interest rate, yield curve, and yield-to-maturity mean.
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    • For example, in order to dig deeper into the stock market I need to understand what the terms "recession", "interest rate", "yield curve", and "yield-to-maturity" mean.
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    • I want to gain knowledge about how micro and micro economy factors can affect our decision making regarding personal finances.
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    • I want to gain knowledge about how micro and micro economyic factors can affect our decision -making process regarding personal finances.
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    • While insurance, especially voluntary health insurance and voluntary life insurance, would give me a release that on the chance of my unemployment due to health problems or even accidental death such an event would not cause any financial inconvenience to my loved ones.
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    • While insurance, especially voluntary health insurance and voluntary life insurance, would give me a release that on the chance of my unemployment due to health problems or even accidental death, and such an event would not cause any financial inconvenience to my loved ones.
    • While insurance, especially voluntary health insurance and voluntary life insurance, would give me a release thatand life insurance, would be helpful on the chanceevent of my unemployment due to health problems or even accidental death such an event would not cause any financial inconvenience to my loved ones.
    • Whileith insurance, especially voluntary health insurance and voluntary life insurance, would give me a release that on the chance of my unemployment due to health problems or even accidental death such an eventlife insurance, I am confident that my family would not causendure any financial inconvenience to my loved onehardships.
    • While iInsurance, - especially voluntary health insurance and voluntary life insurance, - would give me a relpeasce of mind that oin the chance of myevent of being unemploymented due to health problems or even accidental death, then such an events would not cause any financial inconvenience to my loved ones.
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    • For most of my life, I was self-employed which meant that my income was unstable and depended on many factors.
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    • It was tough for me to truly plan my budget, but now when it becomes more predictable I can finally make some personal financial planning in order to achieve my ambitious financial goals.
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    • It was tough for me to truly plan my budget, but now when ithat becoames more predictable I can finally make some personal financial planning in order to achieve my ambitious financial goals. ¶
    • It was tough for me to truly plan my budget, but now when itmy situation becomes more predictable I can finally make some personal financial planning in order to achieve my ambitious financial goals. ¶
    • It was tough for me to truly plan my budget, but now when itthat my situation has becomes more predictable, I can finally makedo some personal financial planning in order to achieve my ambitious financial goals. ¶
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