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  • Cover letter (please help me correct it)

    • Dear Hiring Manager, Currently doing a master’s degree in translation in France, I am looking for an internship for a duration of 3 months and starting from September, 2021.
    • Through the 3 years of my studies, I have developed a great number of skills which could be useful for your company.
    • Those skills include linguistic, writing and analytical skills, but also a great attention to detail, which are essential in order to produce fully accurate and well-worded translations.
    • Moreover, my studies have helped me develop my curiosity about other cultures, and especially Japanese culture.
  • Since I was a child, Japan has always attracted me.
  • Therefore, when I got into university, I decided to study the language, along with English.
  • At the end of my first year, I went to Japan for the first time and since then, my interest in this country has never stopped growing.
    • Besides, I chose for my training the option International relations which has allowed me to maintain not only a spirit of curiosity but also openness to the world.
  • Considering the fact that I want to work in an international environment, being able to understand how the relations between countries work is essential.
  • In addition to languages, I am also very interested in sports.
  • I did track and field for 12 years.
    • My dedication and hark work enabled me to participate in the European Athletics Junior Championships and helped me become someone with a great discipline, focused and who is always striving to improve.
  • Thank you for your time and consideration.
  • Please don’t hesitate to contact me if you need any additional information.
  • Sincerely, L.X

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    • Dear Hiring Manager, Currently doing a master’s degree in translation in France, I am looking for an internship for a duration of 3 months and starting from September, 2021.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Dear Hiring Manager,¶

      CI am currently doing a master's degree in translation in France, I and am looking for an internship for a duration of 3 months and starting from September, 2021 for 3 months.
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    • Through the 3 years of my studies, I have developed a great number of skills which could be useful for your company.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Throughout the 3 years of my studies, I have developed a great number of skills which could be useful forin your company.
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    • Those skills include linguistic, writing and analytical skills, but also a great attention to detail, which are essential in order to produce fully accurate and well-worded translations.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Those skills include linguistic, writing and analytical skills, but also aas well as an ability to pay great attention to detail, which are essential in order to produce fully accurate and well-worded translations.
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    • At the end of my first year, I went to Japan for the first time and since then, my interest in this country has never stopped growing.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Besides, I chose for my training the option International relations which has allowed me to maintain not only a spirit of curiosity but also openness to the world.
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    • Besides, I chose for my trainingI chose the option International relations for my training which has allowed me to maintain not only a spirit of curiosity but also an openness to the world.
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    • Considering the fact that I want to work in an international environment, being able to understand how the relations between countries work is essential.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • My dedication and hark work enabled me to participate in the European Athletics Junior Championships and helped me become someone with a great discipline, focused and who is always striving to improve.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • My dedication and harkd work enabled me to participate in the European Athletics Junior Championships and helped me become someone with a great discipline, focused and who is always striving to improve.
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