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    • essay on topic ”possible solutions to the housing problem”

  • Today, finding a place to live in a city or a town can be a challenge.
    • There is no enough space for everyone who wants to live there.
  • In this essay, two possible solutions to this problem will be discussed.
    • The first of these is a renovation of old houses where people no longer live.
    • Such a tactic could prove successful and might also need less funding, as the money will only be spent on renovating or remodelling already built flats.
    • That could be a satisfactory solution, but it has a downside.
    • The number of epmty houses that are to be renovated is not big enough to provide housing for everyone who needs it.
    • So a second possible solution can be considered, which is building more high-rise blocks.
    • Such a type of building is guaranteed to have a lot of space it in while taking little space on its own.
    • It is important to take into consideration the fact, that the more high-rise blocks are built, the more space is saved for more such blocks.
    • To conclude, I believe the second idea to be a perfect solution to the housing problem.
    • If government invests money in building high-rise blocks, it will get the largest number of new flats possible, as well as plenty of space left for new constructions that could be not only houses, but also shopping malls, hospitals and so on.

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    • Such a tactic could prove successful and might also need less funding, as the money will only be spent on renovating or remodelling already built flats.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Such a tacticsolution could prove successful and might also need less funding, as the money willrequire less capital investment, as funds would only be spent on the renovating or remodelling already built flaton of already-existing structures.
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    • The number of epmty houses that are to be renovated is not big enough to provide housing for everyone who needs it.
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    • The number of epmpty houses that are to be renovated is not big enough to provide housing for everyone who needs it.
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    • The number of epmty houses that are to beuninhabited structures available for renovatedion is not big enough to provide housing for everyone who needs itsufficient to meet the current total demand for housing.
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  • Ayat 8
    • So a second possible solution can be considered, which is building more high-rise blocks.
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    • So aA second possible solution can be considered, which is building more high-riseis the construction of blocks of apartments (i.e., apartment blocks).
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  • Ayat 9
    • Such a type of building is guaranteed to have a lot of space it in while taking little space on its own.
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    • Such a type of building is guaranteed to have a lot of space itn int while taking up little land space on its own.
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    • Such a type of building is guaranteed to haveBecause such "blocks" are very tall, they offer a lot of living space s wit hin while taking little space on its owna structure which has a "small" footprint.
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  • Ayat 10
    • It is important to take into consideration the fact, that the more high-rise blocks are built, the more space is saved for more such blocks.
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    • It is important to take into consideration the fact, that: the more high-rise blocks that are built, the more land space is saved for more such blockuildings.
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    • If government invests money in building high-rise blocks, it will get the largest number of new flats possible, as well as plenty of space left for new constructions that could be not only houses, but also shopping malls, hospitals and so on.
      Undi sekarang!
    • If gGovernment invests money in building high-rise blocks, it will get the largest number of new flats possible, as well as plenty of space leftand/or private developer investment in the construction of apartment blocks saves on space, offers a multitude of new housing spaces, leaving ample room for newthe constructions that could be not only houses, but also shopping malls, hospitals and so on. ¶
       more blocks as well as shopping facilities, medical facilities, etc.
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