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BANTU BUAT PEMBETULAN SEKARANG!Dibetulkan

Teks daripada federica_a2 - English

  • New Year’s Resolutions

    • As usal at the begging of the year, I delight to make a list about new year’s resolution and set my personal goals Over time I realized that I am not able of achieve all my goals, so this year I have chosen them carefully and I am going to focus properly only on three resolutions in order to have more chance to achieve them.
    • The first resolution is to keep practise english at least 30 minutes per day.
    • Last year I was pretty persistance and I got good results expecially in listening because I whatched several number of tv shows in english and in improving my accent thanks to accentcoach found out on social media.
    • The second resolution is to cut off the unnecessary costs and save money: last year I kept track of my expences and I noticed that I have bought unecessary dress or home stuff that actually I don’t need or I don’t use, but I got only for the influenced of advertisement.
    • The thirth resolution is reading at least 1 book per month.
    • I love reading and I want to carve out time to continue my favourite hobby.
    • I think all my three resolutions explained above are achievable, so I have work hard to follow consistenly.

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

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  • Ayat 1
    • As usal at the begging of the year, I delight to make a list about new year’s resolution and set my personal goals Over time I realized that I am not able of achieve all my goals, so this year I have chosen them carefully and I am going to focus properly only on three resolutions in order to have more chance to achieve them.
      Undi sekarang!
    • As usual at the begginning of the year, I delight to[myself] makeing a list aboutof new year’s resolutions and setting my personal goals.
      Over time I realized that I am not       [able to achieve / capable of achieveing] all my goals, so this year I have chosen them carefully and I am going to focus properly only on three resolutions in order to have morebetter chance tos at achieveing them.
      gfarnabgfarnab profile picture Ulasan
      Undi sekarang!
    • As usual at the beingging of the year, I delight tomyself in makeing a list about nof New yYear’s resolutions and set myting personal goals.
      Over time       , I've realized that I am not able tof achieve all my goals, so this year I have chosen them carefully and I am going to focus properly focus only on three resolutions in order to have more chance tos of achieveing them.
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
  • Ayat 2
  • Ayat 3
    • Last year I was pretty persistance and I got good results expecially in listening because I whatched several number of tv shows in english and in improving my accent thanks to accentcoach found out on social media.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Last year I was pretty persistanceent and I got good results, exspecially in listening, because I whatched several number of tv TV-shows in eEnglish, and in improving my accent thanks to accentcoach, which I found out on social media.
      gfarnabgfarnab profile picture Ulasan
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Last year I was pretty persistance andent. I got good results exspecially in listening because I whatched several number of tvTV shows in eEnglish and i. Also, I've been improving my accent thanks to an accent coach who I'd found out on social media.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Ulasan
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
  • Ayat 4
    • The second resolution is to cut off the unnecessary costs and save money: last year I kept track of my expences and I noticed that I have bought unecessary dress or home stuff that actually I don’t need or I don’t use, but I got only for the influenced of advertisement.
      Undi sekarang!
    • The second resolution is to cut off theall unnecessary costs and save money: last year I kept track of my expencses and I noticed that I have bought unnecessary dress orattires/clothes/raiments/garments and home stuff that actually I don’t need or I don’t use, but I got only fordue to the influenced of advertisement.
      gfarnabgfarnab profile picture Ulasan
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • The second resolution is to cut off theback on unnecessary costs and save money: l. Last year I kepthad been keeping track of my expencses and I noticed that I haved bought unnecessary dresses or home stuff that I actually I dodidn’t need or I don’t use, but I got only for theecause of being influenced ofby advertisements.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Ulasan 1
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
  • Ayat 5
  • Ayat 6
  • Ayat 7
    • I think all my three resolutions explained above are achievable, so I have work hard to follow consistenly.
      Undi sekarang!
    • I think all my three resolutions explained above are achievable, so I [must / have to] work hard to followabide by them consistently.
      gfarnabgfarnab profile picture Ulasan
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • I think all my three resolutions as explained above are achievable, sobut I have to work hard to follow them up consistently.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Ulasan
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7