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  • Theatre or film?

  • 1) When you have a behind-the-scenes job, there can be a lot of thing which are involved with the theatre.
  • For instance, it’s important to create a necessary ambiance, an attire, I mean the right atmosphere to impart to spectators the impression of true present as if spectators could live with actors their lives.
  • It also can amaze spectators.
  • 2) One of the moste important thing is the strength of the storyline.
  • It can be a really strong tool to make spectators think about social problems, for example.
  • A good story can touch their feelings and maybe make them change their own lives.
  • At the same time there is another important thing - the delivery of the performances because the way you show to other people your own thoughts and feeling is an indispensable part of a behind-the-scenes job.
  • 3) At the theatre performances are going on the stage and you can see a live action.
  • In films a lot of actions can be created with computer technologies which is not possible at the theatre.
  • In films lots of scenes can be repeated whereas t the theatre all the actions are going in a real time.
  • So, a film is a final result of an editor while there are always a creative process at the theatre where actors cam improvise.

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    • 1) When you have a behind-the-scenes job, there can be a lot of thing which are involved with the theatre.
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    • For instance, it’s important to create a necessary ambiance, an attire, I mean the right atmosphere to impart to spectators the impression of true present as if spectators could live with actors their lives.
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    • At the same time there is another important thing - the delivery of the performances because the way you show to other people your own thoughts and feeling is an indispensable part of a behind-the-scenes job.
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    • In films a lot of actions can be created with computer technologies which is not possible at the theatre.
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    • So, a film is a final result of an editor while there are always a creative process at the theatre where actors cam improvise.
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