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Tekstong galing sa AlexHope - English

  • The income inequality between us

    • When I think about presidential statements, I would like to believe in efforts to assure a better place to live in.
    • In other words, the government should grant a state of well-being to everyone in which income inequality don’t fit in.
    • In Brazil, it’s pretty common to see beggars sleeping on rough sidewalks or the youth losing their jobs during the current economic crisis.
    • It’s unfair that many people don’t have your own house or beggars don’t have dignity in their lifes -- the extremely riches are the minority, the majority of people are poor and lives with no hope, no money, no perspective.
    • What is behind of these noticiable and terrible news about income inequality?
    • When businessmans contribute in evading taxes, authorities taking a bribe to be silent about the wrong thing happening, then it’s obvious that poverty is increasing between brazilians.
    • People uses to accuse only the government, but they don’t do the difference when we talk about to be an example of honesty for others.
    • The first change must be always upon us, so we will be able to criticize the government failures, discuss and figure out together how to solve the income inequality problem.
    • When we talk about solve it, we’re also discussing about being an empathic person daily.
    • It’s pretty common in Brazil be mean about someone’s body -- if you’re slim, they always emphacize you are ”so thin that you always fly away with the wind”.
  • If you’re fat, they’re always trying to put you down with words that aren’t nice.
    • Unfortunately, it’s pretty common be mean, especially between adults.
    • Because of it, mental illness and depression are so usual.
    • Mental illness is not only a public health, is also an economic problem -- when young people get a mental illness, then more people are not able to work and contribute with the country, more people don’t want to keep studying in high school or college.
    • Be emphatic on your daily life, so all people can be reach the equality dream.
    • I don’t have ideas to write more, so I’m stopping here.

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