Korektoj

Text from AlexHope - English

  • The income inequality between us

    • When I think about presidential statements, I would like to believe in efforts to assure a better place to live in.
    • In other words, the government should grant a state of well-being to everyone in which income inequality don’t fit in.
    • In Brazil, it’s pretty common to see beggars sleeping on rough sidewalks or the youth losing their jobs during the current economic crisis.
    • It’s unfair that many people don’t have your own house or beggars don’t have dignity in their lifes -- the extremely riches are the minority, the majority of people are poor and lives with no hope, no money, no perspective.
    • What is behind of these noticiable and terrible news about income inequality?
    • When businessmans contribute in evading taxes, authorities taking a bribe to be silent about the wrong thing happening, then it’s obvious that poverty is increasing between brazilians.
    • People uses to accuse only the government, but they don’t do the difference when we talk about to be an example of honesty for others.
    • The first change must be always upon us, so we will be able to criticize the government failures, discuss and figure out together how to solve the income inequality problem.
    • When we talk about solve it, we’re also discussing about being an empathic person daily.
    • It’s pretty common in Brazil be mean about someone’s body -- if you’re slim, they always emphacize you are ”so thin that you always fly away with the wind”.
  • If you’re fat, they’re always trying to put you down with words that aren’t nice.
    • Unfortunately, it’s pretty common be mean, especially between adults.
    • Because of it, mental illness and depression are so usual.
    • Mental illness is not only a public health, is also an economic problem -- when young people get a mental illness, then more people are not able to work and contribute with the country, more people don’t want to keep studying in high school or college.
    • Be emphatic on your daily life, so all people can be reach the equality dream.
    • I don’t have ideas to write more, so I’m stopping here.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • In other words, the government should grant a state of well-being to everyone in which income inequality don’t fit in.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • In other words, the government should grant a state of well-being to everyone in which income inequality don’t fit inwho is suffering from income inequality and doesn't fit into society.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
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    • In Brazil, it’s pretty common to see beggars sleeping on rough sidewalks or the youth losing their jobs during the current economic crisis.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • In Brazil, it’s pretty common to see beggars sleeping on rough sidewalks or the youth losing their jobs during the current economic crisis.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • It’s unfair that many people don’t have your own house or beggars don’t have dignity in their lifes -- the extremely riches are the minority, the majority of people are poor and lives with no hope, no money, no perspective.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • It’s unfair that many people don’t have youtheir own house or beggars don’t have dignity in their lifves -- the extremely riches are the minority, the majority of people are poor and lives with no hope, no money, no perspective.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
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  • Frazo 6
    • When businessmans contribute in evading taxes, authorities taking a bribe to be silent about the wrong thing happening, then it’s obvious that poverty is increasing between brazilians.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • When businessmansen contribute ing to the situation by evading taxes, authorities taking a bribes to be silent about the wrong things happening, then it’s obvious thate reasons why poverty is increasing between bBrazilians.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
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    • People uses to accuse only the government, but they don’t do the difference when we talk about to be an example of honesty for others.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • People are usesd to accuseing only the government, but they don’t dosee the difference when we talk about to bebeing an example of honesty for others.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • The first change must be always upon us, so we will be able to criticize the government failures, discuss and figure out together how to solve the income inequality problem.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The first change must be always upon ubegin with ourselves, so we will be able to criticize the government failures, and discuss and figure out together how to solve the income inequality problem.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
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    • It’s pretty common in Brazil be mean about someone’s body -- if you’re slim, they always emphacize you are ”so thin that you always fly away with the wind”.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • It’s pretty common in Brazil to be mean about someone’s body -- if you’re slim, theyyou'll always emphacizesise that you are ”so thin that you always fly away with the wind”.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
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    • Mental illness is not only a public health, is also an economic problem -- when young people get a mental illness, then more people are not able to work and contribute with the country, more people don’t want to keep studying in high school or college.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Mental illness is not only a public health, it is also an economic problem -- when young people get a mental illness, then more people are not able to work and contribute withto the country. Furthermore, more people don’t want to keep studying in high school or college.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14
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