Korekty

Text from AlexHope - English

  • The income inequality between us

    • When I think about presidential statements, I would like to believe in efforts to assure a better place to live in.
    • In other words, the government should grant a state of well-being to everyone in which income inequality don’t fit in.
    • In Brazil, it’s pretty common to see beggars sleeping on rough sidewalks or the youth losing their jobs during the current economic crisis.
    • It’s unfair that many people don’t have your own house or beggars don’t have dignity in their lifes -- the extremely riches are the minority, the majority of people are poor and lives with no hope, no money, no perspective.
    • What is behind of these noticiable and terrible news about income inequality?
    • When businessmans contribute in evading taxes, authorities taking a bribe to be silent about the wrong thing happening, then it’s obvious that poverty is increasing between brazilians.
    • People uses to accuse only the government, but they don’t do the difference when we talk about to be an example of honesty for others.
    • The first change must be always upon us, so we will be able to criticize the government failures, discuss and figure out together how to solve the income inequality problem.
    • When we talk about solve it, we’re also discussing about being an empathic person daily.
    • It’s pretty common in Brazil be mean about someone’s body -- if you’re slim, they always emphacize you are ”so thin that you always fly away with the wind”.
  • If you’re fat, they’re always trying to put you down with words that aren’t nice.
    • Unfortunately, it’s pretty common be mean, especially between adults.
    • Because of it, mental illness and depression are so usual.
    • Mental illness is not only a public health, is also an economic problem -- when young people get a mental illness, then more people are not able to work and contribute with the country, more people don’t want to keep studying in high school or college.
    • Be emphatic on your daily life, so all people can be reach the equality dream.
    • I don’t have ideas to write more, so I’m stopping here.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
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    • In other words, the government should grant a state of well-being to everyone in which income inequality don’t fit in.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • In other words, the government should grant a state of well-being to everyone in which income inequality don’t fit inwho is suffering from income inequality and doesn't fit into society.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
    • In Brazil, it’s pretty common to see beggars sleeping on rough sidewalks or the youth losing their jobs during the current economic crisis.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • In Brazil, it’s pretty common to see beggars sleeping on rough sidewalks or the youth losing their jobs during the current economic crisis.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
    • It’s unfair that many people don’t have your own house or beggars don’t have dignity in their lifes -- the extremely riches are the minority, the majority of people are poor and lives with no hope, no money, no perspective.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • It’s unfair that many people don’t have youtheir own house or beggars don’t have dignity in their lifves -- the extremely riches are the minority, the majority of people are poor and lives with no hope, no money, no perspective.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • When businessmans contribute in evading taxes, authorities taking a bribe to be silent about the wrong thing happening, then it’s obvious that poverty is increasing between brazilians.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • When businessmansen contribute ing to the situation by evading taxes, authorities taking a bribes to be silent about the wrong things happening, then it’s obvious thate reasons why poverty is increasing between bBrazilians.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
    • People uses to accuse only the government, but they don’t do the difference when we talk about to be an example of honesty for others.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • People are usesd to accuseing only the government, but they don’t dosee the difference when we talk about to bebeing an example of honesty for others.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
    • The first change must be always upon us, so we will be able to criticize the government failures, discuss and figure out together how to solve the income inequality problem.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • The first change must be always upon ubegin with ourselves, so we will be able to criticize the government failures, and discuss and figure out together how to solve the income inequality problem.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
    • It’s pretty common in Brazil be mean about someone’s body -- if you’re slim, they always emphacize you are ”so thin that you always fly away with the wind”.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • It’s pretty common in Brazil to be mean about someone’s body -- if you’re slim, theyyou'll always emphacizesise that you are ”so thin that you always fly away with the wind”.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10
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  • Zdanie 14
    • Mental illness is not only a public health, is also an economic problem -- when young people get a mental illness, then more people are not able to work and contribute with the country, more people don’t want to keep studying in high school or college.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Mental illness is not only a public health, it is also an economic problem -- when young people get a mental illness, then more people are not able to work and contribute withto the country. Furthermore, more people don’t want to keep studying in high school or college.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 14DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 14
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