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Pesan dari Maryam1987 - English

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    • Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies.
  • Do you agree or disagree?
    • In the current era, scientific research is conducted not only by the government but also by the private section.
    • While there are many disputes about which of them are proper to accept this responsibility, I completely agree with the given statement on the basis of some rational reasons.
    • To begin with, there are two main reasons why private companies have not sufficient qualifications to accept this delicate responsibility.
    • First and foremost, most of the time scientific projects require adequate time and budget to achieve accurate outcomes with high-quality.
    • In other words, corporations might tend to manipulate results in order to maximize profits when they inadequate access to time and qualified employees.
    • Take a company that produces sensitive medicine as an obvious example; that may introduce a new drug it may commence hurriedly before detailed reviews on this new product.
  • The early announcement of new products can create a variety of difficulties for patients who trust the new medicine.
  • Last but not least, a number of corporations, without having enough investigation might enter vulnerable fields such as GM foods and genetic engineering which could have detrimental consequences either for society or nature.
  • Furthermore, the government is able to dedicate sufficient finances to provide proper assistance for scientific research.
    • Firstly, when scientific research is supported by the government, it may reach the highest standards in the university departments.
    • Simply put, this research may have high-quality that is benefits society rather than concentration solely on competitive advantages or achieving financial returns.
    • The confirmed result could overspread throughout the globe, particularly among the valid academic community.
    • Secondly, governments could invest in beneficial specific fields such as renewable energy that are useful not only for academic subjects but also for addressing the needs of society.
  • Thus, if valuable academic surveys are managed by administrations, they are more likely to positively influence the community.
  • In conclusion, I personally strongly agree that the government should accept sole responsibility for scientific investigations.

TOLONG, BANTUANNYA UNTUK MEMBENARKAN SETIAP KALIMAT! - English

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    • While there are many disputes about which of them are proper to accept this responsibility, I completely agree with the given statement on the basis of some rational reasons.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • While there are many disputes about which of them aresector, government or corporate, is proper to accept this responsibility, I completely agree with the given statement on the basis of some rational reasons.
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4
  • Kalimat 5
    • To begin with, there are two main reasons why private companies have not sufficient qualifications to accept this delicate responsibility.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • To begin with, there are two main reasons why private companies do not have not sufficient qualifications to accept this delicate responsibility.
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5
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    • In other words, corporations might tend to manipulate results in order to maximize profits when they inadequate access to time and qualified employees.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • In other words, corporations might tend to manipulate results in order to maximize profits when they have inadequate access to time and qualified employees.
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 7TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 7
  • Kalimat 8
    • Take a company that produces sensitive medicine as an obvious example; that may introduce a new drug it may commence hurriedly before detailed reviews on this new product.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • Take a company that produces sensitive medicine as an obvious example; that company may introduce a new drug it may commencebut do so hurriedly before detailed reviews on this new product.
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 8TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 8
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    • Last but not least, a number of corporations, without having enough investigation might enter vulnerable fields such as GM foods and genetic engineering which could have detrimental consequences either for society or nature.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 10TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 10
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    • Simply put, this research may have high-quality that is benefits society rather than concentration solely on competitive advantages or achieving financial returns.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • Simply put, this research may have high- quality that is benefits society rather than concentrationg solely on competitive advantages or achieving financial returns.
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 13TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 13
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    • Secondly, governments could invest in beneficial specific fields such as renewable energy that are useful not only for academic subjects but also for addressing the needs of society.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • Secondly, gGovernments could also invest in beneficial specific fields such as renewable energy that are useful not only for academic subjects but also for addressing the needs of society.
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 15TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 15
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