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    • Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies.
  • Do you agree or disagree?
    • In the current era, scientific research is conducted not only by the government but also by the private section.
    • While there are many disputes about which of them are proper to accept this responsibility, I completely agree with the given statement on the basis of some rational reasons.
    • To begin with, there are two main reasons why private companies have not sufficient qualifications to accept this delicate responsibility.
    • First and foremost, most of the time scientific projects require adequate time and budget to achieve accurate outcomes with high-quality.
    • In other words, corporations might tend to manipulate results in order to maximize profits when they inadequate access to time and qualified employees.
    • Take a company that produces sensitive medicine as an obvious example; that may introduce a new drug it may commence hurriedly before detailed reviews on this new product.
  • The early announcement of new products can create a variety of difficulties for patients who trust the new medicine.
  • Last but not least, a number of corporations, without having enough investigation might enter vulnerable fields such as GM foods and genetic engineering which could have detrimental consequences either for society or nature.
  • Furthermore, the government is able to dedicate sufficient finances to provide proper assistance for scientific research.
    • Firstly, when scientific research is supported by the government, it may reach the highest standards in the university departments.
    • Simply put, this research may have high-quality that is benefits society rather than concentration solely on competitive advantages or achieving financial returns.
    • The confirmed result could overspread throughout the globe, particularly among the valid academic community.
    • Secondly, governments could invest in beneficial specific fields such as renewable energy that are useful not only for academic subjects but also for addressing the needs of society.
  • Thus, if valuable academic surveys are managed by administrations, they are more likely to positively influence the community.
  • In conclusion, I personally strongly agree that the government should accept sole responsibility for scientific investigations.

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    • While there are many disputes about which of them are proper to accept this responsibility, I completely agree with the given statement on the basis of some rational reasons.
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    • While there are many disputes about which of them aresector, government or corporate, is proper to accept this responsibility, I completely agree with the given statement on the basis of some rational reasons.
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    • To begin with, there are two main reasons why private companies have not sufficient qualifications to accept this delicate responsibility.
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    • To begin with, there are two main reasons why private companies do not have not sufficient qualifications to accept this delicate responsibility.
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    • In other words, corporations might tend to manipulate results in order to maximize profits when they inadequate access to time and qualified employees.
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    • In other words, corporations might tend to manipulate results in order to maximize profits when they have inadequate access to time and qualified employees.
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    • Take a company that produces sensitive medicine as an obvious example; that may introduce a new drug it may commence hurriedly before detailed reviews on this new product.
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    • Take a company that produces sensitive medicine as an obvious example; that company may introduce a new drug it may commencebut do so hurriedly before detailed reviews on this new product.
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    • Last but not least, a number of corporations, without having enough investigation might enter vulnerable fields such as GM foods and genetic engineering which could have detrimental consequences either for society or nature.
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    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 10Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 10
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    • Simply put, this research may have high-quality that is benefits society rather than concentration solely on competitive advantages or achieving financial returns.
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    • Simply put, this research may have high- quality that is benefits society rather than concentrationg solely on competitive advantages or achieving financial returns.
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    • Secondly, governments could invest in beneficial specific fields such as renewable energy that are useful not only for academic subjects but also for addressing the needs of society.
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    • Secondly, gGovernments could also invest in beneficial specific fields such as renewable energy that are useful not only for academic subjects but also for addressing the needs of society.
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