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Design my new car

• There is no doubt that cars play an important role in our life .Cars have good effect on the society and individual .So ,we can’t do without cars .I will write about two points :1st ,the design of my car and 2nd ,what can do my car .

• First, The design of my car is fictional.

• It has a lot of beautiful things .It has sex tire and it is four wheel .It has a nice color ,It is color same the color of the mountain .Also ,it is huge and strong car .The design of car from inside is great .It has inside a lot of beautiful things Such as LED light .It has design from wood .Also ,it’s cheer make of leather .it is comfortable car .

• Second , what can do my car .My car can do many things .It can travel too far away ,because it has good system and smart system .Also ,it can climb a mountain ,because it has six tire and it is 4 wheel .In the last ,it can Carrying nine passengers ,so it is huge and strong .

• Finally ,I can say that my car is Comfortable and strong .Also ,it is huge And it has a nice Color .I advise take my design and do in the fact .This is a beautiful plan ,so I will do in the future.