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  • Design my new car

    • There is no doubt that cars play an important role in our life .Cars have good effect on the society and individual .So ,we can’t do without cars .I will write about two points :1st ,the design of my car and 2nd ,what can do my car .
    • First, The design of my car is fictional.
    • It has a lot of beautiful things .It has sex tire and it is four wheel .It has a nice color ,It is color same the color of the mountain .Also ,it is huge and strong car .The design of car from inside is great .It has inside a lot of beautiful things Such as LED light .It has design from wood .Also ,it’s cheer make of leather .it is comfortable car .
    • Second , what can do my car .My car can do many things .It can travel too far away ,because it has good system and smart system .Also ,it can climb a mountain ,because it has six tire and it is 4 wheel .In the last ,it can Carrying nine passengers ,so it is huge and strong .
    • Finally ,I can say that my car is Comfortable and strong .Also ,it is huge And it has a nice Color .I advise take my design and do in the fact .This is a beautiful plan ,so I will do in the future.

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    • There is no doubt that cars play an important role in our life .Cars have good effect on the society and individual .So ,we can’t do without cars .I will write about two points :1st ,the design of my car and 2nd ,what can do my car .
      Voter maintenant !
    • There is no doubt that cars play an important role in our life . Cars have good effect on the society and individual .So ,s. So, we can’t do without cars . I will write about two points :1st ,- the design of my car and 2nd ,- what can do my car do.
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • There is no doubt that cars play an important role in our life . Cars have a good effect on the society and individual .So ,. So, we can’t do without cars . I will write about two points :1st , the design of my car and 2nd , what can do my car can do.
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • There is no doubt that cars play an important role in our life . Cars have gooda postive effect on bothe society and individuals . So , we can’t do without cars . I will write about two points :1st ,:¶
      firstly,       the design of my car and 2nd ,what can do, secondly, what my car can do.
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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    • It has a lot of beautiful things .It has sex tire and it is four wheel .It has a nice color ,It is color same the color of the mountain .Also ,it is huge and strong car .The design of car from inside is great .It has inside a lot of beautiful things Such as LED light .It has design from wood .Also ,it’s cheer make of leather .it is comfortable car .
      Voter maintenant !
    • It has a lot of beautiful things . It has seix tires and it is four wheels. .It hais a nice color. ,It is color same ththe same color of theas a mountain . Also , it is a huge and strong car . The design of the car from inside is great . It has inside a lot of beautiful things Such as LED light .It has designLED lights. It is made from wood . Also , it’s cheerair is makde of leather .it. The car is comfortable car to sit in.
      genzaimugenzaimu profile picture Commentaires
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • It has a lot of beautiful things .It hstunning features such as seix hot-looking tires and it is four wheel .It has, a nice color ,It is color samlike the color of thea mountain . Also , it is a huge and strong car . The design of car from insideinterior design is great .It hasand inside there are a lot of beautiful things Ssuch as LED lights. .It has been design from wood . Also , it’s cheerseats are make of leather .it is. I can say that it’s a comfortable car .
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    • Second , what can do my car .My car can do many things .It can travel too far away ,because it has good system and smart system .Also ,it can climb a mountain ,because it has six tire and it is 4 wheel .In the last ,it can Carrying nine passengers ,so it is huge and strong .
      Voter maintenant !
    • Second , what can do my car .do? My car can do many things . It can travel too far away ,very far, because it has good system and smart system . Also , it can climb a mountain , because it has six tires and it is 4 wheel .In the last ,s. Also, it can Ccarrying nine passengers , so it is huge and strong .
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      50% GOOD (2 votes)
    • Second ly, what can do my car .do? My car can do many things . It can travel too far away ,really far because it has a good system and smart system . Also , it can climb a mountains ,because it has six tires and it is 4 wheel .In thes. Last but not least , it can Ccarrying nine passengers ,sobecause it is huge and strong .
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      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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    • Finally ,I can say that my car is Comfortable and strong .Also ,it is huge And it has a nice Color .I advise take my design and do in the fact .This is a beautiful plan ,so I will do in the future.
      Voter maintenant !
    • Finally , I can say that my car is Ccomfortable and strong . Also , it is huge Aand it hais a nice Ccolor . I advise you to take my design and do in the fact .make it. This is a beautiful plan , so I will domake it in the future.
      genzaimugenzaimu profile picture Commentaires
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Finally , I can say that my car is Ccomfortable and, strong .Also ,it is, huge Aand italso has a nice Ccolor . I advise you to take my design and do in the fact .This is a beautiful plan ,so I will do in themake this car. I will definitely make this car in future. ¶
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Commentaires
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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