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    • For a couple of days, I kept tracking every hour of the time I’m awake to understand on what I spend my day.
  • I did it to find my time killers and how long it really takes me to do something compared to the time I have scheduled for this activity.
    • It’s not news, that most of us have a tendency to underestimate the time we need for a task.
    • Unfortunately, I’m not that close to my ideal time allocation and I need to work on how to change it for the better as soon as possible.
    • There are a few factors that affect my use of time: First, I don’t have a work-life balance.
    • I don’t have strictly scheduled working hours, studying hours, and scheduled time for fun and ”me time”.
    • Because of this, my usual day is a mess and when I think about what task to pick next I become nervous because of the load and deadlines.
    • Second, unfortunately, I have a tendency of putting things off until the last moment and committing procrastination on a regular basis.
  • Sometimes, because of this behavior, I have to sacrifice time for sleep to complete assignments or work projects on time.
  • There are some strategies that I will definitely implement in my life to manage my time effectively: I will use my calendar planner and daily to-do list.
  • I have them for a long time and tried to manage my time using different technics.
    • Once I micromanaged my schedule and become a slave of my Google calendar, but this time I will use it more concisely and in accordance with my priorities and my bio rhymes.
    • Also, I will definitely schedule a time for socializing and time for myself when I can do something just for fun.
  • I will break up large projects into small pieces and schedule time periods to complete them long before the deadline.
  • I also will schedule additional time in case if something will go wrong.
    • I see it as doable parts of a large project that I can complete one by one by spending from 2 to 6 hours of the scheduled amount of time on a daily basis.
  • I will reward myself after I did a certain amount of work that should be done on that day.
  • For example, I will allow myself to read a book just for pleasure, to watch a couple of episodes of a TV-series, or write something just to let my imagination go.
    • It’s crucial to reward myself only for completing all tasks that were planned otherwise this strategy is not going to work like the acquired reflexes of Pavlov’s dog.
  • In order to develop this habit correctly, it is also important for me to learn how to plan an adequate number of tasks per day.
  • Not too much, but not too little that life can turn into a series of continuous unproductive rewards.
    • Poor time management causing me a lot of stress.
    • It’s pity that we have touched upon the topics of time management and stress management only now, although this should have been done at the beginning of this course.
    • Perhaps it would have helped not to ruin my life through some bad study habits and poor work ethic as much as I did during this course.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • For a couple of days, I kept tracking every hour of the time I’m awake to understand on what I spend my day.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • For a couple of days, I kept tracking every hour of the time I'm awake to understand on whathow I spend my day.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • I did it to find my time killers and how long it really takes me to do something compared to the time I have scheduled for this activity.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
    • Unfortunately, I’m not that close to my ideal time allocation and I need to work on how to change it for the better as soon as possible.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Unfortunately, I'm not that close to my ideal time allocation and I need to work on how to change it for the better as soon as possible.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
  • câu 6
    • I don’t have strictly scheduled working hours, studying hours, and scheduled time for fun and ”me time”.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I don't have strictly scheduled working hours, studying hours, and schedule time, and time for fun and me time”.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • Because of this, my usual day is a mess and when I think about what task to pick next I become nervous because of the load and deadlines.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Because of this, my usual day is a mess, and when I think about what task to pick next, I become nervous because of the load and deadlines.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • Second, unfortunately, I have a tendency of putting things off until the last moment and committing procrastination on a regular basis.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Second, unfortunately, I have a tendency of putting things off until the last moment and committingam procrastinationg on a regular basis.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • Sometimes, because of this behavior, I have to sacrifice time for sleep to complete assignments or work projects on time.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • There are some strategies that I will definitely implement in my life to manage my time effectively: I will use my calendar planner and daily to-do list.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
  • câu 12
    • Once I micromanaged my schedule and become a slave of my Google calendar, but this time I will use it more concisely and in accordance with my priorities and my bio rhymes.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • OnceBefore, I micromanaged my schedule and become a slave of my Google calendar, but this time I will use it more concisely and in accordance with my priorities and my bio rhymes.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • Also, I will definitely schedule a time for socializing and time for myself when I can do something just for fun.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Also, I will definitely schedule a time for socializing and time for myself when I can do something just for fun.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
  • câu 14
    • I will break up large projects into small pieces and schedule time periods to complete them long before the deadline.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14
  • câu 15
  • câu 16
    • I see it as doable parts of a large project that I can complete one by one by spending from 2 to 6 hours of the scheduled amount of time on a daily basis.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I see it as doable parts of a large project that I can complete one by one by spending from 2 to 6 hours of the scheduled amount of time on a daily basis.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16
  • câu 17
  • câu 18
    • For example, I will allow myself to read a book just for pleasure, to watch a couple of episodes of a TV-series, or write something just to let my imagination go.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18
  • câu 19
    • It’s crucial to reward myself only for completing all tasks that were planned otherwise this strategy is not going to work like the acquired reflexes of Pavlov’s dog.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It's crucial to reward myself only for completing all tasks that were planned, otherwise this strategy is not going to work like the acquired reflexes of Pavlov's dog.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19
  • câu 20
    • In order to develop this habit correctly, it is also important for me to learn how to plan an adequate number of tasks per day.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20
  • câu 21
  • câu 22
  • câu 23
    • It’s pity that we have touched upon the topics of time management and stress management only now, although this should have been done at the beginning of this course.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It’s's a pity that we have touched upon the topics of time management and stress management only now, although this should have been done at the beginning of this course.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 23ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 23
  • câu 24
    • Perhaps it would have helped not to ruin my life through some bad study habits and poor work ethic as much as I did during this course.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Perhaps it would have helped not to ruin my life through some bad study habits and poor work ethics as much as I did during this course.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 24ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 24