Pataisymai

Text from Anastasya93 - English

  • Task 2 part 1

  • Task: A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions.
  • Old- fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
  • To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
  • Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
  • ______________________ I can agree to the statement that our society has become more vulnerable when it is surrounded by non-educated conspecifics which also influences the social status and the property of somebody.
  • When we see a beggar on the street we suggest that he has no education, takes drugs and it is his own fault that he lives on the street as he hasn't worked hard enough for his own well-being.
  • This reminds me of on aspect we can find in America, especially lived by the Republicans.
  • The fight against the law that everyone should get medical insurance.
  • In America you have to pay for your insurance and when it comes to an illness you also don't get the full prize back you have paid for your doctor's appointment.
  • Most of the Republicans think that having an insurance shows how much you have worked and how much you earn it.
  • In Germany everyone has health insurance and it is paid by the state because we think that the highest good in a human being's life is it's health.
  • So if we see a beggar on the street, we should not think he deserved his destiny because he has not done any good to this world.
  • I personally know of a beggar who has been a surgeon once and chose to live on the street after a small girl died on his table and he has never been able to forgive himself.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • ______________________ I can agree to the statement that our society has become more vulnerable when it is surrounded by non-educated conspecifics which also influences the social status and the property of somebody.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
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    • When we see a beggar on the street we suggest that he has no education, takes drugs and it is his own fault that he lives on the street as he hasn't worked hard enough for his own well-being.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6
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    • In America you have to pay for your insurance and when it comes to an illness you also don't get the full prize back you have paid for your doctor's appointment.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9
  • Sentence 10
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    • In Germany everyone has health insurance and it is paid by the state because we think that the highest good in a human being's life is it's health.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11
  • Sentence 12
    • So if we see a beggar on the street, we should not think he deserved his destiny because he has not done any good to this world.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 12
  • Sentence 13
    • I personally know of a beggar who has been a surgeon once and chose to live on the street after a small girl died on his table and he has never been able to forgive himself.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 13