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Văn bản từ leonardoad - English

  • My first post

    • This is my first post on this platform.
    • I'll start by telling my English Learning story.
    • It all started in Brazil, where I was born, in 2014 when I was listening to a Brazilian podcast called weRgeeks.
    • In that episode, they talked about how important is to have English skills in this globalized world and also how much better is the experience of watching American movies and TV shows without the need for subtitles.
    • As I was tired of searching for subtitles for my favourite shows, I thought it could be a good idea to finally learn English since in all the years learning it in school I wasn't really willing to understand and enjoy it, I was just getting enough to pass the tests.
    • Long story short, since then, I started to listen to podcasts, watch Youtube, read books, write, speak, and search content on the web, trying to do almost everything in English.
    • In 2018, after 4 years of learning and practicing my English virtually every day, I was able to get a job and moved to Canada with my family.
    • However, even after getting here, I still have lots to learn and my speaking is still poor since I don't speak that much with other people and my main communication tool is a textbased chat.
    • Well, I guess I wrote too much already! Bye!

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    • It all started in Brazil, where I was born, in 2014 when I was listening to a Brazilian podcast called weRgeeks.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It all started in Brazil, where I was born, i. In 2014, when I was listening to a Brazilian podcast called weRgeeks.
    • It all startedbegan in Brazil, where I was born, in 2014, whilen I was listening to a Brazilian podcast called weRgeeks.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • In that episode, they talked about how important is to have English skills in this globalized world and also how much better is the experience of watching American movies and TV shows without the need for subtitles.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In that episode, they talked about how important it is to have English skills in this globalized world, and also how much better is the experience of watching American movies and TV shows is without the need for subtitles.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • As I was tired of searching for subtitles for my favourite shows, I thought it could be a good idea to finally learn English since in all the years learning it in school I wasn't really willing to understand and enjoy it, I was just getting enough to pass the tests.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • As I was tired of searching for subtitles for my favourite shows, I thought it could be a good idea to finally learn English, since in all the years learning it in school I wasn't really willing to understand and enjoy it,. I was just getting enough to pass the tests.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • Long story short, since then, I started to listen to podcasts, watch Youtube, read books, write, speak, and search content on the web, trying to do almost everything in English.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Long story short, since then, I started to listen to podcasts, watch videos on YoutTube, read books, write, speak, and search content on the web, --trying to do almost everything in English.
    • Long story short, since thenIn short, I started to listening to podcasts, watching videos at Youtube, reading books, writeing, speaking, and searching web content oin the web, trying to do almost everything in EnglishEnglish as much as possible.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
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    • In 2018, after 4 years of learning and practicing my English virtually every day, I was able to get a job and moved to Canada with my family.
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    • In 2018, aAfter 4four years of learning and studying/practicing my English virtuallyjust about every day, I was able to get a job in Canada and moved to Canadahere with my family.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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    • However, even after getting here, I still have lots to learn and my speaking is still poor since I don't speak that much with other people and my main communication tool is a textbased chat.
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    • However, even after getting here, I still have lots to learn and m. My speaking is still poor since I don't speak that much with other people, ands my main communication tool is a text-based chat.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
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