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  • Beartown

    • The book I have been reading is “Beartown” by Swedish author Fredrik Backman.
    • The story takes place in a provincial Swedish town called Bjornstad.
    • The thing which unites all the people living in the town is hockey.
    • Every game of a local youth team becomes the most important event in Bjornstad’s life.
    • The young players have real chances to win the championship, which has never happened before.
    • This fact just increases already enormous attention to the game among the inhabitants of this town.
    • Subsequently, the team won the semifinal and it created an incredible festive atmosphere in Bjornstad.
    • Not only did this win make everyone happy, but it also triggered events which have led to a crime committed by the team’s best player.
    • That day changed everything: it divided best friends and made local dwellers vent their spite on the victim who put the local star’s career in danger.
    • The theme “we can’t protect our children” runs through the whole book.
    • In my opinion, it reflects author’s own concerns.
    • Howsoever you try to teach and understand your children, they live their own lives and are able to commit acts hardly understandable to their parents.

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    • Every game of a local youth team becomes the most important event in Bjornstad’s life.
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    • Everyach game of aplayed by the local youth team becomesgames is of the utmost important event in Bjornstad’s lifece in the life of the community.
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    • The young players have real chances to win the championship, which has never happened before.
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    • The young players have real chances to win the championship, which has never happened befteam stands a good chance of winning their league's championship for the first time in the team's historey.
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    • This fact just increases already enormous attention to the game among the inhabitants of this town.
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    • This fact just increases already enormous attention to the game among the inhabitants of this towne possibility of winning the league championship has the town's inhabitants even more excited than usual.
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    • Subsequently, the team won the semifinal and it created an incredible festive atmosphere in Bjornstad.
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    • Subsequently, tThe team won the semifinal and it created an incrediblechampionship playoff semifinal game, creating a most festive atmosphere in Bjornstad.
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    • Not only did this win make everyone happy, but it also triggered events which have led to a crime committed by the team’s best player.
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    • Not only did this wiBut this victory did more than make everyone happy, but: it also triggered events which have led to a crime committed byled one of the team's best players to commit a crime.
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    • That day changed everything: it divided best friends and made local dwellers vent their spite on the victim who put the local star’s career in danger.
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    • That day changed everything: it divided best friends and made local dwellers vent theirIt was the day that changed everything, causing rifts among friends and inciting expressions of spite ontoward the victim who put the local star’s career in danger.of the crime committed by the young star and thus imperiled his career.¶

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    • Howsoever you try to teach and understand your children, they live their own lives and are able to commit acts hardly understandable to their parents.
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    • Howsoever you try to teach andRegardless how you raise your children or how much understanding your children extend to them, they will live their own lives and are able to commit acts hardly understandalargely according to their personal proclivities and thus many of their behaviors will be incomprehensible to you, their parents. ¶
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