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nadalgiabao'den mesaj - English

    • The nightmare

    • Yesterday, I had the worst nightmare ever in my life.
  • After a long day, I went to sleep and the nightmare began.
    • It was about the disappearance of my family members without any clues.
    • When the woke up, it was a nice day and my sister started to prepare for breakfast.
    • My mother and my little brother went to the market to buy the meal for us but different from the other day, today they spent more time to go.
    • I and my sister waited for them over 30 minutes but we can't know when will they return.
    • After we have been waiting for an hour, my sister and I went to the market to make sure how are they because we were so worried.
    • When we check all the markets, we didn't see them and then my sister gave me the money to buy breakfast and she returned back home.
    • There's also my dad at home so I don't need to worry about my sister because my dad is very strong and muscular.
    • After I bought breakfast, I turned back home and then there was a story.
    • When I looked at my mobile phone, there is a sentence so I came closer and closer, and then it said: "My son, my son !!!".
    • At that time, I ran upstairs and said: "help, help" but my dad wasn't in his room so I run to the roof and found my sister, but she wasn't there, at that time, all my neighborhood disappear in a mysterious way.
    • When I woke up, it was 7:00 A.M and I realized how important my family is.

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    • It was about the disappearance of my family members without any clues.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • It was about the disappearance of my family members without any clues.

      NOTE: Your sentence is good, but maybe a bit more impacting if put this way:¶

      It was about the mysterious disappearance of my family without a trace of evidence as to where or why.
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
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    • My mother and my little brother went to the market to buy the meal for us but different from the other day, today they spent more time to go.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • My mother and my little (younger) brother went to the market to buy the mealfood for us but different fromunlike the other day, today they spent more time to gohey took longer today (this time).
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 5YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 5
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    • After we have been waiting for an hour, my sister and I went to the market to make sure how are they because we were so worried.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • After we have been waiting for'd waited an hour, my sister and I went to the market to make sure how are they because we were so worried.became concerned and so we went to the market to check on them, to make sure they were okay.
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 7YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 7
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    • When we check all the markets, we didn't see them and then my sister gave me the money to buy breakfast and she returned back home.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • When we check all the markets, we didn't see them andt then market, so my sister gave me the money to buy breakfast and she returned (went back) home.
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 8YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 8
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    • There's also my dad at home so I don't need to worry about my sister because my dad is very strong and muscular.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • There's also my dad at home so I doidn't need to worry about my sister because my dad is very strong and muscular.ing home alone because our father, who is muscular and very strong, was home.
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 9YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 9
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    • When I looked at my mobile phone, there is a sentence so I came closer and closer, and then it said: "My son, my son !!!".
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • When I looked at my mobile phone, there is a sentence so I came closer and closer, and then it said:ile on the way home I looked at my phone and saw a message that read "My son, my son !!!".
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 11YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 11
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    • At that time, I ran upstairs and said: "help, help" but my dad wasn't in his room so I run to the roof and found my sister, but she wasn't there, at that time, all my neighborhood disappear in a mysterious way.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • At that time, I ran upstairs and said:cried "hHelp, help"!", but my dad wasn't in his room, so I ruan to the roof and found my sister, but she wasn't there, at that time, all my neighborhood disappear in a mysterious wayto find ; in fact my entire neighborhood had mysteriously disappeared.
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    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 12YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 12
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