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Texto de nadalgiabao - English

    • The nightmare

    • Yesterday, I had the worst nightmare ever in my life.
  • After a long day, I went to sleep and the nightmare began.
    • It was about the disappearance of my family members without any clues.
    • When the woke up, it was a nice day and my sister started to prepare for breakfast.
    • My mother and my little brother went to the market to buy the meal for us but different from the other day, today they spent more time to go.
    • I and my sister waited for them over 30 minutes but we can't know when will they return.
    • After we have been waiting for an hour, my sister and I went to the market to make sure how are they because we were so worried.
    • When we check all the markets, we didn't see them and then my sister gave me the money to buy breakfast and she returned back home.
    • There's also my dad at home so I don't need to worry about my sister because my dad is very strong and muscular.
    • After I bought breakfast, I turned back home and then there was a story.
    • When I looked at my mobile phone, there is a sentence so I came closer and closer, and then it said: "My son, my son !!!".
    • At that time, I ran upstairs and said: "help, help" but my dad wasn't in his room so I run to the roof and found my sister, but she wasn't there, at that time, all my neighborhood disappear in a mysterious way.
    • When I woke up, it was 7:00 A.M and I realized how important my family is.

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