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  • Pyramid

    • The last book I read is "Pyramid" by a soviet writer Boris Bondarenko.
    • It' s a story about 3 physicists trying to enhace the understanding of elementary particles.
    • Dmitryi, the central character, worked extremely hard while others were not so diligent.
    • Eventually they managed to finish the work and verified a theory by experiment.
    • But all the mental efforts made Dmitryi exhausted and he felt he had to take a break.
    • He went to Kamchatka, a peninsula washed by two seas and the Pacific Ocean.
    • At this place he partly recovered strength.
    • But walking by the Ocean's shore Dmitryi suddenly understood that everything he and his colleagues had worked on was a mistake.
    • And this mistake could have overturned the whole conception of modern physics.

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    • Dmitryi, the central character, worked extremely hard while others were not so diligent.
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    • Dmitryiy, the central character, worked extremely hard while others were not so diligent.

      NOTE: Among academics and professional linguists, the universally accepted Russian > English transliteration of "ий" = "iy".
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    • Eventually they managed to finish the work and verified a theory by experiment.
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    • EThey eventually they managed to finishsucceeded in completing their work and verified a theory by experimentthrough experimentation, thus producing empirical evidence that supported their theory.
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    • But all the mental efforts made Dmitryi exhausted and he felt he had to take a break.
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    • But all the mental efforts made Dmitryi exhausted and he felt he had to takeThe time and effort invested by Dmitriy left him exhausted and in need of a break.
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    • But walking by the Ocean's shore Dmitryi suddenly understood that everything he and his colleagues had worked on was a mistake.
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    • But walking by the Ocean's shore Dmitryi suddenly understood that everything he and his colleagues had worked on was a mistakeHowever, during a stroll along the shore of the ocean, Dmitriy realized that all of the work his colleagues and he had completed was erroneous.
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    • And this mistake could have overturned the whole conception of modern physics.
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    • And this mistake could have overturned the whole conHe realized that their error could have upset, in their entirety, the preceptions of modern physics.
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