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    • Motorized in Russia

    • I live in an old city, where lots of cobbled roads, unusing tram tracks, prehistoric streets design and by the way road quality is poor.
    • Because of not a very good public transport system, people prefer have a private car, it's characteristically to all the country, maybe except Moscow.
    • And the most motorized city in Russia is Vladivostok. Guess why?
    • Because of proximity to Japan Vladivostok is the biggest sales market for used Japan cars.
    • The same scheme is in my city, cause it's the most western city, we are a sales market for old German cars.
    • Honestly, I prefer relible, economical and environmentally friendly Japan cars, but it's already the other story.

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    • I live in an old city, where lots of cobbled roads, unusing tram tracks, prehistoric streets design and by the way road quality is poor.
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    • I live in an old city, where lots of that's rife with cobbledstone roads, unusinged tram tracks, prehistoric streets design and by the way road quality is poorarchaic street layouts (i.e., planning), and exceptionally poor road surface conditions.¶

      NOTE: Having spent the last two consecutive years driving the roadways of Russia and Ukraina, I know EXACTLY what you're trying to describe. Americans and West Europeans CANNOT EVEN IMAGINE the poor-quality condition of the surfaces of most roadways in the former USSR. Some of those road surfaces can DESTROY your vehicle if you're not very (very!) careful      .
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    • Because of not a very good public transport system, people prefer have a private car, it's characteristically to all the country, maybe except Moscow.
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    • Because of not a very goodWith the possible exception of Moscow, most of Russia's municipal public transportation system,s are poor, and thus many people prefer to have a private car, it's characteristically to all the country, maybe except Moscownd use their own vehicles to get around.
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    • And the most motorized city in Russia is Vladivostok. Guess why?
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    • And the most motorized city in Russia is Vladivostok. GVladivostok has more private automobiles on its roads than any other city in Russia. Can you guess why?
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    • The same scheme is in my city, cause it's the most western city, we are a sales market for old German cars.
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    • The same scheme is in my city, cause it's the most western city, we are a sales marketgoes for my city, which is located on the western edge of Russia and thus exhibits a strong demand for olused German cars.
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    • Honestly, I prefer relible, economical and environmentally friendly Japan cars, but it's already the other story.
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    • Honestly, I would prefer reliable, economical and environmentally -friendly Japanese cars, but ithat's already the nother story.
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