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    • Some people believe that price is the only consideration while buying something.
    • Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
    • It is sometimes argued that cost can play a vital role to purchase products.
    • In my opinion, it would be wrong the purchasers just pay attention to the price to buy goods instead of considering their qualities and durability.
    • On the one hand, it is irrefutable that price is played an essential role to purchase produces.
    • It is a decisive factor perhaps to avoid people to capture on financial debt trap.
    • Sometimes a number of people just attend to the cost of goods so they purchase what tempts them without the insight of what they need it actually or not.
    • Moreover, some people prefer to suffer in shopping malls to buy categories that advertising on social media.
    • For instance; many companies encourage people to consume far more than is necessary for some countries especially near Christmas.
    • On the other hand, we cannot disregard other parameters such as quality and longevity which can impact people's opinions to purchase the goods.
    • In other words, although the price is significant in the long-term, quality can ensure customers stay loyal to appropriate brands.
    • However, some people ignore stuff's quality and only to have them, so in this attitude quality, may is sacrificed for the price.
  • For example; there are different automobile brands in my county, but among them, there is a brand it has become well-known in my country since 20 years, although it has not good quality, most people who are not able to actually afford to buy automobile has the good quality they prefer to drive them.
    • To sum up, Individuals should be regarding some principles before buying something.
    • However, some customers are not going to carry out a price comparison every time they shop.
    • Instead, they are looking for a quality, trustworthy brands, and enjoyable shopping experience.

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    • In my opinion, it would be wrong the purchasers just pay attention to the price to buy goods instead of considering their qualities and durability.
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    • In my opinion, it would be wrong for the purchasers justo pay attention to the price to buy goods instead ofonly when which goods to purchase; the buyer should also considering their qualities andof goods, e.g., their durability.
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    • In my opinion, it would be wrong theif purchasers justonly payid attention to the price to buyof goods instead ofwhen considering their qualities andrelative values of quality, such as a product's durability.
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    • It is a decisive factor perhaps to avoid people to capture on financial debt trap.
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    • It is a decisive factor perhaps to avoid people to capture on financial debt trapPrice, in the end, is often the most decisive factor in avoiding a purchase that one can ill afford.
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    • It iPrice is perhaps a decisive factor perhaps to avoid people to capture on financial debt trapfor consumers looking to avoid accumulating unnecessary debt.
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    • Sometimes a number of people just attend to the cost of goods so they purchase what tempts them without the insight of what they need it actually or not.
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    • Sometimes a number of people just attend to the cost of goods so they purchase what tempts them without the insight of whatMany people simply make purchases of particular goods based on price, and without regard to they need it actually or notcessity of having such items.
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    • Moreover, some people prefer to suffer in shopping malls to buy categories that advertising on social media.
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    • Moreover, somemany people prefer to suffer, falling prey to the attractions of advertisements, crowd into shopping malls toand buy categories that advertising on social mediagoods without much thought.
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    • For instance; many companies encourage people to consume far more than is necessary for some countries especially near Christmas.
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    • For instance; many companieAdvertisers encourage people to consume far more than is necessary for some countries, especially nearas Christmas approaches.
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    • On the other hand, we cannot disregard other parameters such as quality and longevity which can impact people's opinions to purchase the goods.
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    • On the other hand, we cannot disregard othere should keep in mind other decision-making parameters such as quality and longevity which can impact people's opinions to purchase theof given goods.
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    • In other words, although the price is significant in the long-term, quality can ensure customers stay loyal to appropriate brands.
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    • In other words, although the price is significant in the long-term,While the price of a given good might be significantly steep at the time of its purchase, the quality can ensure customers stay loyal to appropriad durability of the particular good, in the long-term, justifies the purchase and serves to foster brands loyalty.
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    • However, some people ignore stuff's quality and only to have them, so in this attitude quality, may is sacrificed for the price.
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    • However, some peopleStill, many prefer to ignore stuff'sthe quality and only to have them, so in this attitude quality, may is sacrificed for the pricof a given good and purchase it regardless, based on price alone.
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    • For example; there are different automobile brands in my county, but among them, there is a brand it has become well-known in my country since 20 years, although it has not good quality, most people who are not able to actually afford to buy automobile has the good quality they prefer to drive them.
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    • However, some customers are not going to carry out a price comparison every time they shop.
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    • However, some customers are not going to carry out a price comparison every time they shopBut there will always be consumers who are unwilling to compare goods according to quality and price very time they step out for a shopping expedition.
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    • Instead, they are looking for a quality, trustworthy brands, and enjoyable shopping experience.
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    • Instead, they are looking for a quality, trustworthy brands, and enjoyableseek to purchase trusted brands, thus (potentially) experiencing a more enjoyable and satisfying shopping experience. ¶
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