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Maryam1987 szövege - English

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    • Some people believe that price is the only consideration while buying something.
    • Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
    • It is sometimes argued that cost can play a vital role to purchase products.
    • In my opinion, it would be wrong the purchasers just pay attention to the price to buy goods instead of considering their qualities and durability.
    • On the one hand, it is irrefutable that price is played an essential role to purchase produces.
    • It is a decisive factor perhaps to avoid people to capture on financial debt trap.
    • Sometimes a number of people just attend to the cost of goods so they purchase what tempts them without the insight of what they need it actually or not.
    • Moreover, some people prefer to suffer in shopping malls to buy categories that advertising on social media.
    • For instance; many companies encourage people to consume far more than is necessary for some countries especially near Christmas.
    • On the other hand, we cannot disregard other parameters such as quality and longevity which can impact people's opinions to purchase the goods.
    • In other words, although the price is significant in the long-term, quality can ensure customers stay loyal to appropriate brands.
    • However, some people ignore stuff's quality and only to have them, so in this attitude quality, may is sacrificed for the price.
  • For example; there are different automobile brands in my county, but among them, there is a brand it has become well-known in my country since 20 years, although it has not good quality, most people who are not able to actually afford to buy automobile has the good quality they prefer to drive them.
    • To sum up, Individuals should be regarding some principles before buying something.
    • However, some customers are not going to carry out a price comparison every time they shop.
    • Instead, they are looking for a quality, trustworthy brands, and enjoyable shopping experience.

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