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ADJUVA AD EMEDANDUM NUNC!qualiter corripiantur

Scriptum ab Maryam1987 - English

    • would you please correct my text? Thank you so much

    • Some people believe that price is the only consideration while buying something.
    • Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
    • It is sometimes argued that cost can play a vital role to purchase products.
    • In my opinion, it would be wrong the purchasers just pay attention to the price to buy goods instead of considering their qualities and durability.
    • On the one hand, it is irrefutable that price is played an essential role to purchase produces.
    • It is a decisive factor perhaps to avoid people to capture on financial debt trap.
    • Sometimes a number of people just attend to the cost of goods so they purchase what tempts them without the insight of what they need it actually or not.
    • Moreover, some people prefer to suffer in shopping malls to buy categories that advertising on social media.
    • For instance; many companies encourage people to consume far more than is necessary for some countries especially near Christmas.
    • On the other hand, we cannot disregard other parameters such as quality and longevity which can impact people's opinions to purchase the goods.
    • In other words, although the price is significant in the long-term, quality can ensure customers stay loyal to appropriate brands.
    • However, some people ignore stuff's quality and only to have them, so in this attitude quality, may is sacrificed for the price.
  • For example; there are different automobile brands in my county, but among them, there is a brand it has become well-known in my country since 20 years, although it has not good quality, most people who are not able to actually afford to buy automobile has the good quality they prefer to drive them.
    • To sum up, Individuals should be regarding some principles before buying something.
    • However, some customers are not going to carry out a price comparison every time they shop.
    • Instead, they are looking for a quality, trustworthy brands, and enjoyable shopping experience.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • In my opinion, it would be wrong the purchasers just pay attention to the price to buy goods instead of considering their qualities and durability.
      Elige nunc !
    • In my opinion, it would be wrong for the purchasers justo pay attention to the price to buy goods instead ofonly when which goods to purchase; the buyer should also considering their qualities andof goods, e.g., their durability.
      exRangerexRanger profile picture Comments
      Elige nunc !
    • In my opinion, it would be wrong theif purchasers justonly payid attention to the price to buyof goods instead ofwhen considering their qualities andrelative values of quality, such as a product's durability.
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      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 4ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 4
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    • It is a decisive factor perhaps to avoid people to capture on financial debt trap.
      Elige nunc !
    • It is a decisive factor perhaps to avoid people to capture on financial debt trapPrice, in the end, is often the most decisive factor in avoiding a purchase that one can ill afford.
      exRangerexRanger profile picture Comments
      Elige nunc !
    • It iPrice is perhaps a decisive factor perhaps to avoid people to capture on financial debt trapfor consumers looking to avoid accumulating unnecessary debt.
      almoore1024almoore1024 profile picture Comments
      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 6ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 6
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    • Sometimes a number of people just attend to the cost of goods so they purchase what tempts them without the insight of what they need it actually or not.
      Elige nunc !
    • Sometimes a number of people just attend to the cost of goods so they purchase what tempts them without the insight of whatMany people simply make purchases of particular goods based on price, and without regard to they need it actually or notcessity of having such items.
      exRangerexRanger profile picture Comments
      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 7ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 7
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    • Moreover, some people prefer to suffer in shopping malls to buy categories that advertising on social media.
      Elige nunc !
    • Moreover, somemany people prefer to suffer, falling prey to the attractions of advertisements, crowd into shopping malls toand buy categories that advertising on social mediagoods without much thought.
      exRangerexRanger profile picture Comments
      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 8ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 8
  • Sententia 9
    • For instance; many companies encourage people to consume far more than is necessary for some countries especially near Christmas.
      Elige nunc !
    • For instance; many companieAdvertisers encourage people to consume far more than is necessary for some countries, especially nearas Christmas approaches.
      exRangerexRanger profile picture Comments
      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 9ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 9
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    • On the other hand, we cannot disregard other parameters such as quality and longevity which can impact people's opinions to purchase the goods.
      Elige nunc !
    • On the other hand, we cannot disregard othere should keep in mind other decision-making parameters such as quality and longevity which can impact people's opinions to purchase theof given goods.
      exRangerexRanger profile picture Comments
      Elige nunc !
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    • In other words, although the price is significant in the long-term, quality can ensure customers stay loyal to appropriate brands.
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    • In other words, although the price is significant in the long-term,While the price of a given good might be significantly steep at the time of its purchase, the quality can ensure customers stay loyal to appropriad durability of the particular good, in the long-term, justifies the purchase and serves to foster brands loyalty.
      exRangerexRanger profile picture Comments
      Elige nunc !
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 11ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 11
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    • However, some people ignore stuff's quality and only to have them, so in this attitude quality, may is sacrificed for the price.
      Elige nunc !
    • However, some peopleStill, many prefer to ignore stuff'sthe quality and only to have them, so in this attitude quality, may is sacrificed for the pricof a given good and purchase it regardless, based on price alone.
      exRangerexRanger profile picture Comments
      Elige nunc !
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    • For example; there are different automobile brands in my county, but among them, there is a brand it has become well-known in my country since 20 years, although it has not good quality, most people who are not able to actually afford to buy automobile has the good quality they prefer to drive them.
      Elige nunc !
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    • However, some customers are not going to carry out a price comparison every time they shop.
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    • However, some customers are not going to carry out a price comparison every time they shopBut there will always be consumers who are unwilling to compare goods according to quality and price very time they step out for a shopping expedition.
      exRangerexRanger profile picture Comments
      Elige nunc !
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    • Instead, they are looking for a quality, trustworthy brands, and enjoyable shopping experience.
      Elige nunc !
    • Instead, they are looking for a quality, trustworthy brands, and enjoyableseek to purchase trusted brands, thus (potentially) experiencing a more enjoyable and satisfying shopping experience. ¶
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