수정본

HELP TO CORRECT NOW!수정

ioliver (으)로 부터 도착한메세지 - English

원본
Corrected Version

- Spare time
- The absence of the internet helps to generate new ideas what to do in spare time

ioliverDecember 2019투표하세요!
- 스팸 신고

각 문장을 수정해주세요! - English

제목
- Spare time
  투표하세요!
- ~~Spare time~~Making better use of one's spare time when the "internet is down".
  exRanger 댓글
  
  스팸 신고
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 제목
문장 1
- The absence of the internet helps to generate new ideas what to do in spare time
  투표하세요!
- The absence of the internet helps to generate new ideas on what to do in one's spare time
  Berlusconi 댓글
  
  스팸 신고
- ~~The absence of the internet helps to generate new ideas what to do in~~Internet "downtime" is a good time to think about alternative and potentially productive activities in which one might engage, new and possibly better ways to use one's spare time.
  exRanger 댓글
  
  스팸 신고
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1