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My day.
- Today, I went to buy milk, sugar,bread and yogurt. when i come back at home I feed to cat.Then I spoke with my friend on skype during 30 minutes.After that, I took a shower.Then, I read a little....

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- Today, I went to buy milk, sugar,bread and yogurt. when i come back at home I feed to cat.Then I spoke with my friend on skype during 30 minutes.After that, I took a shower.Then, I read a little....
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