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    • Today, I went to buy milk, sugar,bread and yogurt. when i come back at home I feed to cat.Then I spoke with my friend on skype during 30 minutes.After that, I took a shower.Then, I read a little....

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    • Today, I went to buy milk, sugar,bread and yogurt. when i come back at home I feed to cat.Then I spoke with my friend on skype during 30 minutes.After that, I took a shower.Then, I read a little....
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    • Today, I went to buy milk, sugar, bread and yogurt. wWhen i come back atI returned home, I feed to cat.Then I, spoke with my friend on sSkype duringfor 30 minutes.After that, I, took a shower.Then, I, then read for a lbittle....
    • Today, I went to buy milk, sugar, bread and yogurt. wWhen iI coame back at home I feed tohe cat.Then I spoke with my friend on skype duringfor 30 minutes. After that, I took a shower.T and then, I read a little....
    • Today, I went to buy milk, sugar,bread and yogurt. wWhen i coame back at home I feed tohe cat.Then I spoke with my friend on sSkype duringfor 30 minutes. After that, I took a shower.Tand then, I read a little....
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