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- My day
- Yesterday, I was with my friend and we went to a shop.
- We bought a lot of things, that was very fun !
- I passed a very good afternoon with her and I hope I would see her again before going to England.

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- My day
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- My dDay
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Yesterday, I was with my friend and we went to a shop.
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- Yesterday, I was with my friend ~~and w~~. We went to a shop.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- We bought a lot of things, that was very fun !
  Undi sekarang!
- We bought a lot of things~~, tha~~. It was very fun !
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- We bought a lot of things, and that was very fun !
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- We bought a lot of things, and that was ~~very~~so much fun !
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I passed a very good afternoon with her and I hope I would see her again before going to England.
  Undi sekarang!
- I ~~passe~~had a very good afternoon with her and I hope I w~~ould~~ill see her again before going to England.
  2403elly Ulasan 1
  
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- I ~~passed~~spent a very good afternoon with her, and I hope I w~~ould~~ill see her again before going to England.
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- I ~~passed~~spent a very good afternoon with her and I hope ~~I would~~that I will see her again before going to England.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3