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HJÄLP TILL ATT RÄTTA NU!Rättad

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- My day
- Yesterday, I was with my friend and we went to a shop.
- We bought a lot of things, that was very fun !
- I passed a very good afternoon with her and I hope I would see her again before going to England.

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VÄNLIGEN, HJÄLP TILL ATT RÄTTA VARJE MENING! - English

Rubrik
- My day
  Rösta nu!
- My dDay
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Mening 1
- Yesterday, I was with my friend and we went to a shop.
  Rösta nu!
- Yesterday, I was with my friend ~~and w~~. We went to a shop.
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Mening 2
- We bought a lot of things, that was very fun !
  Rösta nu!
- We bought a lot of things~~, tha~~. It was very fun !
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- We bought a lot of things, and that was very fun !
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- We bought a lot of things, and that was ~~very~~so much fun !
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Mening 3
- I passed a very good afternoon with her and I hope I would see her again before going to England.
  Rösta nu!
- I ~~passe~~had a very good afternoon with her and I hope I w~~ould~~ill see her again before going to England.
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- I ~~passed~~spent a very good afternoon with her, and I hope I w~~ould~~ill see her again before going to England.
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- I ~~passed~~spent a very good afternoon with her and I hope ~~I would~~that I will see her again before going to England.
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- LÄGG TILL en NY KORRIGERING - Mening 3