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  • Why a Master in Environmental issues?

  • Cities can be a starting point for raising citizens’ awareness for sustainable development: if people have effective sustainable alternatives available, they will start using them being themselves promoters of a lifestyle that can make a difference.
  • I really believe that this is possible, that’s why I’d like to be one of the growing number of people who have decided to focus their professional life on environmental issues.
  • In particular, I would like to work in the field of urban planning and be able to carry out projects together with a team of experts for two reasons.
  • Firstly, to improve the lives of citizens; secondly, I believe that improving the common spaces of a city can enable people to see how sustainable development, which places environmental protection at the centre of attention, can really improve their lives.
  • The programme offered by the LSE, which is characterised by a wide range of courses, would allow me to go deeper into the field of urban planning.
  • In addition to the training offered, a number of seminars are being organised in this area, such as the one held on 22 November on the analysis of environmental policies and their costs and benefits.
  • I believe that it is a stimulating environment, especially for students who are about to approach the world of work, such as those of the Master.

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    • Cities can be a starting point for raising citizens’ awareness for sustainable development: if people have effective sustainable alternatives available, they will start using them being themselves promoters of a lifestyle that can make a difference.
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    • I really believe that this is possible, that’s why I’d like to be one of the growing number of people who have decided to focus their professional life on environmental issues.
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    • In particular, I would like to work in the field of urban planning and be able to carry out projects together with a team of experts for two reasons.
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    • Firstly, to improve the lives of citizens; secondly, I believe that improving the common spaces of a city can enable people to see how sustainable development, which places environmental protection at the centre of attention, can really improve their lives.
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    • The programme offered by the LSE, which is characterised by a wide range of courses, would allow me to go deeper into the field of urban planning.
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    • In addition to the training offered, a number of seminars are being organised in this area, such as the one held on 22 November on the analysis of environmental policies and their costs and benefits.
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    • I believe that it is a stimulating environment, especially for students who are about to approach the world of work, such as those of the Master.
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