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  • June 28th

  • Today is Friday, June 28th.
  • Tomorrow is Saturday, June 29th.
  • Yesterday was Thursday, June 27th.
    • this afternoon, I saw in the table a poster with some photos and articles about Origami, it's a art's homework, when I was bending the paper, somebody have beaten the door, then my girl go to open de door, when she returned, I feel the table and she hug me my back (she behing me), and sang a song on my ear that it was ringing on the radio, and she sang: "love me, I'm goin' to buy a airplane for fly, in our honeymoon, my dear, I'm going to buy a train for go the travel".
    • Then, after to she sang that, we did the homework, and talk about we are going to travel without ours fathers, I wanna go to the zoo and she want to go farm for visit our pets, she love the animals, I live my childhood in the farm, 'cause is normal for me see animals, but she is living her live on the city and she only knows dogs and cats.
    • I like when my girl, my cousin, my friends do slumber party and we building a château (castle).
  • I improve my french, some words and like practice with my girl she's Switzerland and the french move my feelings.
  • I like painting with watercolors, I've a purpose, a wish, painting my thin girl.
    • I want to go far far away of here, somethings I feel so sad when I do everything and hope that everything are going well, but, always something happen and ruins all.
    • Always my daddy said to me: "you mustn't upset, almost everything is getting better, always have troubles." Changing the topic, I must make the dinner, I very late and, while I thing in the others things, pass the time and I'he forgotten my things.

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    • this afternoon, I saw in the table a poster with some photos and articles about Origami, it's a art's homework, when I was bending the paper, somebody have beaten the door, then my girl go to open de door, when she returned, I feel the table and she hug me my back (she behing me), and sang a song on my ear that it was ringing on the radio, and she sang: "love me, I'm goin' to buy a airplane for fly, in our honeymoon, my dear, I'm going to buy a train for go the travel".
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    • ¶tThis afternoon, I saw in the table a poster with some photos and articles about Origami on the table, it' was an art's homework, when I was ben. Whilst folding the paper, somebody have beateknocked on the door, then and my girl go to open de door, when she returnedwent to see who it is. When she came back, I feelt the table and she hugged me by my back (she was behingd me), and sang a song on my ear that ithat was ringplaying on the radio, and she sang: "love me, I'm goin' to buy an airplane forto fly, in our honeymoon, my dear, I'm going to buy a train for go theto go travel".
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    • Then, after to she sang that, we did the homework, and talk about we are going to travel without ours fathers, I wanna go to the zoo and she want to go farm for visit our pets, she love the animals, I live my childhood in the farm, 'cause is normal for me see animals, but she is living her live on the city and she only knows dogs and cats.
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    • Then, after to she sang that, we did the homework, and talked about we are going to travelling without ours fatherparents, I wanna go to the zoo and she wants to go to the farm for visiting our pets, she loves the animals, I lived my childhood in the farm, 'causeso its normal for me seeing animals, but she is living her live oin the city and she only knows dogs and cats.
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    • Always my daddy said to me: "you mustn't upset, almost everything is getting better, always have troubles." Changing the topic, I must make the dinner, I very late and, while I thing in the others things, pass the time and I'he forgotten my things.
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    • Always my daddyMy daddy always said to me: "you mustn't be upset, almost everything is getting better,gets better, but you will always have tproublems."¶Changing the topic, I must make the dinner, I am very late and, while I thing was doing the others things, pass the time passed and I'hve forgotten my things.
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    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 10Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 10