添削

June 28th

• this afternoon, I saw in the table a poster with some photos and articles about Origami, it's a art's homework, when I was bending the paper, somebody have beaten the door, then my girl go to open de door, when she returned, I feel the table and she hug me my back (she behing me), and sang a song on my ear that it was ringing on the radio, and she sang: "love me, I'm goin' to buy a airplane for fly, in our honeymoon, my dear, I'm going to buy a train for go the travel".

• Then, after to she sang that, we did the homework, and talk about we are going to travel without ours fathers, I wanna go to the zoo and she want to go farm for visit our pets, she love the animals, I live my childhood in the farm, 'cause is normal for me see animals, but she is living her live on the city and she only knows dogs and cats.

• I like when my girl, my cousin, my friends do slumber party and we building a château (castle).

• I want to go far far away of here, somethings I feel so sad when I do everything and hope that everything are going well, but, always something happen and ruins all.

• Always my daddy said to me: "you mustn't upset, almost everything is getting better, always have troubles." Changing the topic, I must make the dinner, I very late and, while I thing in the others things, pass the time and I'he forgotten my things.