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    • Please help to correct extract from my interview

    • Oxana By the way, the radio is interesting topic to discuss.
    • You got started doing vj/dj sets, field recordings, and now for SWAP exhibition you have chosen radio project.
  • Does it illustrate your way as an artist, showing that radio is more relevant and fascinating to you now than other mediums?
    • Anton There is such a term as “media archaeology” and basically it’s what I’ve been engaged in.
    • This definition was invented by finnish theoretic Erkki Huhtamo.
    • Media archeology can be seen both as field of research and at same time as artistic and critical method.
    • I ironically noded to myself that I went from traditional archeology to media one, because I was into actual archeology earlier.
    • Referring to seemingly old mediums we, at some point, critic excessive accelerating pace of development.
    • Stanislaw Lem, for instance, compared technological and biological evolution, demonstrating that those types that seem to appear invasive and archaic with certain change of ecological environment can rather get further development because it got specific features necessary for survival.
    • And with radio consumer can easy switch himself to producer - the same radio receiver, if desired, can be quickly changed to radio transmitter.
  • You can create some alternative methods of communications with it.
    • It’s appears to me very interesting, initially imaginary concept, that could afterwards come to material form.
    • Also it’s a motive for exhibition visitor how he uses this feature, and from what he can get rid of.
  • Specificity of modern times is that gradual reduction in the cost of technology have lead us to situation, where these stuff, that once were accessible in some exploratory private laboratories, now became available and on their basis you can build your very own systems.
  • In general framework of art history (classical art or new media particularly) this brings to certain revival of trends.
  • Take VR as example, that was developed in America at 60’s , in MIT laboratories, but now, because of general availability, it receive so many users, therefore, fresh impetus.
  • Today the same thing has been happening with the radio.
  • Because of digital technologies radio became so accessible, that now, to put it crudely, have turned into insignificant gadget that comes with computer.
  • All that gains hybrid nature - it’s old technology, but in combination with the new ones create something that was never seen before.
  • Oxana As part of your project #hero you’ve touched burning subject of canonization of the army by both warring groups through the language of generative programs.
  • How does ukrainian viewer interprets your complicated art, build on metaphors, concepts, and here and there harsh musical experiments, and after all, are you expecting comprehension from mediocre ukrainians, who not involved in art world?
  • Anton Yes, I trying to create in meaningful way, and because my media art is not an attraction, usually it can looks dull for the viewer.You must really get it, yeah, that’s the problem.
  • While using complex technology you must find such a simple form of message, which at the same time is accessible and maybe ironic, in some way, while viewer has to caught the statement immediately.
  • Media art can’t be as quick to perceive as a picture - it takes time to immerse yourself in it.
  • For instance, I have noticed even for myself that earlier I used to listen to the music regardless of anything, and now basic way to consume the music is to turn it as background noise, when you work on something.
  • Today spending one hour, doing nothing, just to listen an album it is a luxury.
  • That is the problem of finding the relevant language, especially in Ukraine environment, where people just surviving and trying to earn for a living, and here the problem, that no one want see, been thrown in their face.
  • Basic survival, finding resources for living and home, that we have lost , these issues concern to me the most, as well as to my friends.
  • It was my natural evolution that has been obtained by events of my life.
  • That’s why I cannot say nothing about it, maybe just haven’t quite understand how to find the accessible language to talk about it.
  • Yes, for unprepared audience it can be quite hard.

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    • Does it illustrate your way as an artist, showing that radio is more relevant and fascinating to you now than other mediums?
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • I ironically noded to myself that I went from traditional archeology to media one, because I was into actual archeology earlier.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I ironically nodted to myself that I went from traditional archeology to media one, because I was into actual archeology earlier.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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  • câu 9
    • Stanislaw Lem, for instance, compared technological and biological evolution, demonstrating that those types that seem to appear invasive and archaic with certain change of ecological environment can rather get further development because it got specific features necessary for survival.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Stanislaw Lem, for instance, compared technological and biological evolution, demonstrating that those types that seem to appear invasive and archaic with certain change ofs in the ecological environment can rather get further development because it's got specific features necessary for survival.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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    • And with radio consumer can easy switch himself to producer - the same radio receiver, if desired, can be quickly changed to radio transmitter.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • And with radio consumers can easily switch himself to producers - the same radio receiver, if desired, can be quickly changed to a radio transmitter.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
  • câu 12
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  • câu 14
    • Specificity of modern times is that gradual reduction in the cost of technology have lead us to situation, where these stuff, that once were accessible in some exploratory private laboratories, now became available and on their basis you can build your very own systems.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14
  • câu 15
    • In general framework of art history (classical art or new media particularly) this brings to certain revival of trends.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15
  • câu 16
    • Take VR as example, that was developed in America at 60’s , in MIT laboratories, but now, because of general availability, it receive so many users, therefore, fresh impetus.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16
  • câu 17
  • câu 18
    • Because of digital technologies radio became so accessible, that now, to put it crudely, have turned into insignificant gadget that comes with computer.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18
  • câu 19
    • All that gains hybrid nature - it’s old technology, but in combination with the new ones create something that was never seen before.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19
  • câu 20
    • Oxana As part of your project #hero you’ve touched burning subject of canonization of the army by both warring groups through the language of generative programs.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20
  • câu 21
    • How does ukrainian viewer interprets your complicated art, build on metaphors, concepts, and here and there harsh musical experiments, and after all, are you expecting comprehension from mediocre ukrainians, who not involved in art world?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 21ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 21
  • câu 22
    • Anton Yes, I trying to create in meaningful way, and because my media art is not an attraction, usually it can looks dull for the viewer.You must really get it, yeah, that’s the problem.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 22ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 22
  • câu 23
    • While using complex technology you must find such a simple form of message, which at the same time is accessible and maybe ironic, in some way, while viewer has to caught the statement immediately.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 23ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 23
  • câu 24
  • câu 25
    • For instance, I have noticed even for myself that earlier I used to listen to the music regardless of anything, and now basic way to consume the music is to turn it as background noise, when you work on something.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 25ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 25
  • câu 26
  • câu 27
    • That is the problem of finding the relevant language, especially in Ukraine environment, where people just surviving and trying to earn for a living, and here the problem, that no one want see, been thrown in their face.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 27ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 27
  • câu 28
    • Basic survival, finding resources for living and home, that we have lost , these issues concern to me the most, as well as to my friends.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 28ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 28
  • câu 29
  • câu 30
    • That’s why I cannot say nothing about it, maybe just haven’t quite understand how to find the accessible language to talk about it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 30ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 30
  • câu 31