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  • Extract From My Interview with curator of http://www.mediaartar

    • We met with Anton at loud city centre and start wandering through the streets in order to find some quiet spot to talk.We discover that coffee shops nearby are too noisy, so we find ourselves at Pedagogical Institute yard.
    • It’s so calm here, only some guys in sportswear are sometimes break the stillness while theirs cigarette breaks.
  • Oxana- You are researcher at Open Archive of Ukrainian Media Art.
    • How do you personally evaluate experiments of amateur ukrainian artists, that created media at the 90’s?
    • And do you think it’s possible to successfully create media and other technological art without any particular education?
  • Anton- There are many discussions going on, on how educational practice should be started at George Soros Foundation (The International “Renaissance” Foundation (IMF) was founded by philanthropist George Soros in 1990), that also founded Modern Art Centre in Kiev and Odessa.
  • It was a school of cultural personnel in which current directors and administrators of Mysteckiy Arsenal back then started as assistants and managers.
    • Artists that got there were blown away by its workshops, which educated about innovative technologies, like flash art and HTML.
  • Many of them learned something new and useful, even those who eventually returned to analog media in their art, like Alexander Vereshak (well-known media artist, in 1998 created video projects like Wings of Dove and Videoball, nowadays has returned to pictorial art).
    • Such experience was in some way a turning point for these artists.Today there is no continuing educational basics advanced for contemporary arts, nor private neither public.
    • That’s why such initiatives was so important at that time.
    • In 2013 I was student of such temporary school by myself that gave me so much knowledge (New Art School at Kiev).
    • Later I joined Yanina Prudenko (curator in Open Archive of Ukrainian Media Art) and we created science art school, roughly speaking.
    • Basic benefit of these institutions is developing of communication system.
    • It gives you a push for further self-development, and the next move is for the artist himself.
    • Yes, this system has its flaws because continuing education is more effective: there are consistency and complex of knowledge.
    • It is what lacking in Ukraine, and it’s a problem.
  • For example, I used to learn and explore everything by myself.
    • Aspiration and self education are what I believe to be most important in that process.
    • And generally it’s a main requirement of modern world.

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    • We met with Anton at loud city centre and start wandering through the streets in order to find some quiet spot to talk.We discover that coffee shops nearby are too noisy, so we find ourselves at Pedagogical Institute yard.
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    • We meet with Anton at a loud city centrer and startbegin wandering through the streets in order to find somea quiet spot to talk. We discover that coffee shops nearby are too noisy, so we find ourselves atin the yard of the Pedagogical Institute yard.
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    • It’s so calm here, only some guys in sportswear are sometimes break the stillness while theirs cigarette breaks.
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    • It’s so calm here, there are only some guys in sportswear are sometimeswho occasionally break the stillness while on theirs cigarette breaks.
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    • How do you personally evaluate experiments of amateur ukrainian artists, that created media at the 90’s?
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    • How do you personally evaluate experiments of amateur uUkrainian artists, that created media at the 90’s?
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    • And do you think it’s possible to successfully create media and other technological art without any particular education?
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    • And dDo you think it’s possible to successfully create media and other technological art without any particular education?
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    • Anton- There are many discussions going on, on how educational practice should be started at George Soros Foundation (The International “Renaissance” Foundation (IMF) was founded by philanthropist George Soros in 1990), that also founded Modern Art Centre in Kiev and Odessa.
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    • It was a school of cultural personnel in which current directors and administrators of Mysteckiy Arsenal back then started as assistants and managers.
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    • Artists that got there were blown away by its workshops, which educated about innovative technologies, like flash art and HTML.
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    • Artists that gowent there were blown away by its workshops, which educated them about innovative technologies, like flash art and HTML.
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    • Many of them learned something new and useful, even those who eventually returned to analog media in their art, like Alexander Vereshak (well-known media artist, in 1998 created video projects like Wings of Dove and Videoball, nowadays has returned to pictorial art).
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    • Such experience was in some way a turning point for these artists.Today there is no continuing educational basics advanced for contemporary arts, nor private neither public.
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    • Such an experience was, in some way, a turning point for these artists.Today there is no continuing educational basics for advanced foring contemporary arts, noeither private neitheor public.
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    • In 2013 I was student of such temporary school by myself that gave me so much knowledge (New Art School at Kiev).
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    • In 2013 I myself was a student of such a temporary school by myself(the New Art School at Kiev) that gave me so much knowledge (New Art School at Kiev).
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    • Later I joined Yanina Prudenko (curator in Open Archive of Ukrainian Media Art) and we created science art school, roughly speaking.
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    • Later I joined Yanina Prudenko (the curator in the Open Archive of Ukrainian Media Art) and we created a science art school, roughly speaking.
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    • Yes, this system has its flaws because continuing education is more effective: there are consistency and complex of knowledge.
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    • Yes, this system has its flaws because continuing education is more effective: there areis consistency and complexity of knowledge.
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