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  • Contribution exercise- The Peregrine Hawk

  • General Information One of the most appealing animals found in Italy is the Peregrine Hawk.
  • These attractive creatures belong to the protected species of the Mediterranea's area.
  • In Italy, this wonderful creature nests in different regions, however, it can be found above all in Campania, Abruzzo, and Tuscany.
  • They usually lay eggs in rock walls cavities on the mountains, but it is not unusual to see a Peregrine Hawk 's nest in urban areas.
  • They use to making their homes on high buildings such as old towers and churches bell towers to have a better view of the area.
  • They live on a diet of rodents and average dimension birds such as Pidgeons that they hunt alone, while females look for their chicks until they live to fend for themselves.
  • Observing A Peregrine Hawk.
  • It is not so difficult to catch a sight of a peregrine hawk, though they appear rather secretive animals.
  • In Campania, there are lots of falconry's clubs where instructors show how to fend for this fantastic volatiles.
  • It is also possible to spot a peregrine hawk in Abruzzo's natural reserves where they can be seen hunting in huge plains. it is enthralling to see how fast they surround the prey with a circular flight and then dive to it without hesitation.
  • Hawks are not nocturnal creatures so you won't have to wake up early in the morning to see them.
  • Lastly, not only will you be rewarded with a sight of these fantastic birds, but you will also enjoy Abruzzo's beautiful landscapes.

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    • In Italy, this wonderful creature nests in different regions, however, it can be found above all in Campania, Abruzzo, and Tuscany.
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    • They usually lay eggs in rock walls cavities on the mountains, but it is not unusual to see a Peregrine Hawk 's nest in urban areas.
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    • They use to making their homes on high buildings such as old towers and churches bell towers to have a better view of the area.
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    • They live on a diet of rodents and average dimension birds such as Pidgeons that they hunt alone, while females look for their chicks until they live to fend for themselves.
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    • It is not so difficult to catch a sight of a peregrine hawk, though they appear rather secretive animals.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
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    • In Campania, there are lots of falconry's clubs where instructors show how to fend for this fantastic volatiles.
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  • câu 10
    • It is also possible to spot a peregrine hawk in Abruzzo's natural reserves where they can be seen hunting in huge plains. it is enthralling to see how fast they surround the prey with a circular flight and then dive to it without hesitation.
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    • Lastly, not only will you be rewarded with a sight of these fantastic birds, but you will also enjoy Abruzzo's beautiful landscapes.
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