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    • make friends and learning english

    • I really wanna learn English.
    • English is a international language, and I'm studying at Banking Academy, I will graduate at next month, I study Financial faculty. so, I want to work for Bank or financial company.
    • well, alot of bank, or company require employee good english, so all student need to good english.
    • I'd love to learn English, especially, I want to work for foreign company, because it influent me to dedicate for company, maximum effective work is very important.
    • Besides, I would like to know culture about foreign countries, and informations of the world.
    • Travelling to manny countries is big dream of mind.
    • so, I'd love to make friends from another countries, who can help me to practice and make me good in English. it is happy to help somone Vietnamese. thanks!

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    • English is a international language, and I'm studying at Banking Academy, I will graduate at next month, I study Financial faculty. so, I want to work for Bank or financial company.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • English is an international language, and I'm studying at Banking Academy, I will graduate at next month, I study Financial faculty. so, I want to work for a Bank or financial company.
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    • English is an international language, and. I'm studying at a Banking Academy,; I will graduate at next month,. I study Financial faculty. so,es. I want to work for Ba bank or a financial company.
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    • well, alot of bank, or company require employee good english, so all student need to good english.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • well, a lot of bank, or company require employee to be good at english, so all student need to be good at english.
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    • ¶well, aA lot of bank, ors and companyies require their employees to be good eat English, so all students need to good englishbe proficient in the language.
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    • I'd love to learn English, especially, I want to work for foreign company, because it influent me to dedicate for company, maximum effective work is very important.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I'd love to learn English, especially, as I want to work for a foreign company, because it influent me to dedicate for company, maximum effective work is very important.
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    • Besides, I would like to know culture about foreign countries, and informations of the world.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Besides, I would like to knowlearn about the culture aboutof foreign countries, and be informations ofed about current issues in the world.
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    • so, I'd love to make friends from another countries, who can help me to practice and make me good in English. it is happy to help somone Vietnamese. thanks!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • so, I'd love to make friends from another countries, who can help me to practice and make me good inat English. it is happy to help someone to learn Vietnamese. ¶thanks!
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    • ¶sSo, I'd love to make friends from another countries, who can help me to practicse and make me good inimprove my English. it isI'll be happy to help somone with Vietnamese. ¶tThanks!
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