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Сообщение от NuBui - English

    • make friends and learning english

    • I really wanna learn English.
    • English is a international language, and I'm studying at Banking Academy, I will graduate at next month, I study Financial faculty. so, I want to work for Bank or financial company.
    • well, alot of bank, or company require employee good english, so all student need to good english.
    • I'd love to learn English, especially, I want to work for foreign company, because it influent me to dedicate for company, maximum effective work is very important.
    • Besides, I would like to know culture about foreign countries, and informations of the world.
    • Travelling to manny countries is big dream of mind.
    • so, I'd love to make friends from another countries, who can help me to practice and make me good in English. it is happy to help somone Vietnamese. thanks!

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