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- I hope to travel around de world, but now I don´t have a money.
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- So, I discovered a great opportunity that my profission can offer.
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- I want to be a keeper peace and to work to ONU.
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- I´m policeman military.
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- I´m ~~policeman military~~military police officer.
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