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- keeper peace
- I hope to travel around de world, but now I don´t have a money.
- So, I discovered a great opportunity that my profission can offer.
- I want to be a keeper peace and to work to ONU.
- I´m policeman military.

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- keeper peace
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- ~~keeper peace~~Peace Keeper
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- I hope to travel around de world, but now I don´t have a money.
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- I hope to travel around dthe world, but ~~now~~ I don´t have any money.
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- I hope to travel around dthe world, but ~~now~~at the moment I don´t have any money.
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- So, I discovered a great opportunity that my profission can offer.
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- SoThen, I discovered a great opportunity that my profiession can offer.
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- SoBecause of this, I discovered a ~~great opportunity that my profission can offer~~profession that offers some great opportunities.
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- I want to be a keeper peace and to work to ONU.
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- I want to be a peace keeper ~~peace~~ and to work toat the ONU.
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- I´m policeman military.
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- I´m ~~policeman military~~military police officer.
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- I´m ~~policeman military~~a military police officer.
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