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Hello everybody!
Hello everybody!
My name is Laura and I'm 15.
- I would like learn Korean, Japanese, Russian and Spanish.
- I would like improve my english too and make friends. Write me!

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Tiêu đề
- Hello everybody!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Tiêu đề
câu 1
- Hello everybody!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- My name is Laura and I'm 15.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
câu 3
- I would like learn Korean, Japanese, Russian and Spanish.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I would like to learn Korean, Japanese, Russian and Spanish.
  Jane_jane94 Comments
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
câu 4
- I would like improve my english too and make friends. Write me!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I would like to improve my english ~~too~~ and make friends. Write me!
  Jane_jane94 Comments
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4