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Hello everybody!
Hello everybody!
My name is Laura and I'm 15.
- I would like learn Korean, Japanese, Russian and Spanish.
- I would like improve my english too and make friends. Write me!

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- Hello everybody!
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- Hello everybody!
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- My name is Laura and I'm 15.
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Sentence 3
- I would like learn Korean, Japanese, Russian and Spanish.
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- I would like to learn Korean, Japanese, Russian and Spanish.
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- I would like improve my english too and make friends. Write me!
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- I would like to improve my english ~~too~~ and make friends. Write me!
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