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  • short text + essay: outsourcing

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    • :) • Describe some of the problems that might appear when companies offshore their business to countries like India.
    • (Short text, ~ 75 words) One problem for sure, is the different culture, language or rather the accent those people from India have.
    • Americans are very patriot and prefer to speak with a citizen rather than speak to an Indian guy with a foreign accent.
    • The culture regarding workload and time where a task has to be done has another since due to the local climate environment.
    • No one wants to do anything by a heat of 35°C to 40°C among the shades early in the afternoon.
    • • What considerations might move companies to outsource or offshore parts of their business and what might make them refrain from doing so?
    • (~ 250-300 words) A chairman has to consider a lot of advantages and disadvantages if its company outsources or offshores parts of its departments.
    • Today most common outsourced parts of a company are those parts where time costs really money and the turnover has to become higher.
  • For example - call centers.
    • Right out of dozens companies, is Dell the one how has made the decision to move their service call center for German business customers to the capital of Bulgaria named Sofia.
  • Dell profits from the lower labor costs in Bulgaria compared to the costs in Germany.
  • Due to the fact that the labor market offers enough well educated but unemployed people in Bulgaria, is it simple for Dell to get by with the employees.
  • Dell is a hardware and software developer.
  • The service issue is not its main core competency.
    • By outsourcing it, they got the option to refocus on their main business.
    • All companies have to fear, that they lose the total influence of their service provider.
    • Because in the most of the cases, is a third independent party responsible for the service part.
    • As a barrier to face is the language and culture of a foreign country.
  • The security in a foreign country can become an issue too.
    • Above all, the decision for or against a movement of a department has to consider all important facts, moral/responsibility adverse to the home labor market and the sum of cost savings should fit as a whole concept.

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    • :) • Describe some of the problems that might appear when companies offshore their business to countries like India.
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    • :) ¶¶• Describe some of the problems that mightay appear when companies offshore their businesses to countries like India.
    • :) ¶¶• Describe some of the problems that might appear when a companies offshorey moves their business offshore to countries like India.
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    • (Short text, ~ 75 words) One problem for sure, is the different culture, language or rather the accent those people from India have.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • (Short text, ~ 75 words) ¶¶One problem for sure, is the different culture, language or rather the accent those people fromat Indians have.
    • (Short text, ~ 75 words) ¶¶One problem for sure, is the different culture, languaglanguage and culture or rather the accent those people from India havespeak.
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    • Americans are very patriot and prefer to speak with a citizen rather than speak to an Indian guy with a foreign accent.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Americans are very patriotic and prefer to speak with a citizen rather than speak to an Indian guy with a foreign accent.
    • Americans are very patriotic and prefer to speak with a citizen rather than speak to an Indian guy with a foreign English accent.
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    • The culture regarding workload and time where a task has to be done has another since due to the local climate environment.
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    • There are cultureal differences regarding workload and time, where a task has to be done has another since due to the local climate environment.
    • The cultureal differences regarding workload and time where a task has to be done has another sinceis different also due to the local climate environment.
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    • • What considerations might move companies to outsource or offshore parts of their business and what might make them refrain from doing so?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • • What considerations might move companies to outsource or offshore parts of their businesses and what might make them refrain from doing so?
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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    • (~ 250-300 words) A chairman has to consider a lot of advantages and disadvantages if its company outsources or offshores parts of its departments.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • (~ 250-300 words) ¶¶A chairman has to consider a lot of advantages and disadvantages if itstheir company outsources or offshores parts of itssome of their departments.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
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    • Today most common outsourced parts of a company are those parts where time costs really money and the turnover has to become higher.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Today most common outsourced parts of a company are those parts where time costs really money and the turnover has to become higher.
    • Today most common outsourced parts of a company are those parts where time costs really money and the turnover has to become highfaster.
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    • Right out of dozens companies, is Dell the one how has made the decision to move their service call center for German business customers to the capital of Bulgaria named Sofia.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Right out of dozens companies, is Dell the one how has made the decision to move their service call center for German business customers to the capital of Bulgaria named Sofia.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
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    • Due to the fact that the labor market offers enough well educated but unemployed people in Bulgaria, is it simple for Dell to get by with the employees.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
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    • Above all, the decision for or against a movement of a department has to consider all important facts, moral/responsibility adverse to the home labor market and the sum of cost savings should fit as a whole concept.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Above all, the decision for or against a movement of a department has to take into consideration all important facts, moral/responsibility, adverse to the home labor market, and the sum of cost savings should fit as a whole concept.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 21ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 21