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  • MAGLEV Transportation

  • Maglev is a system of train transportation, derived from magnetic levitation because it uses two sets of magnets.
    • Firstly, a set of magnet repels and pushes the train up off the track as in levitation.
    • Secondly, another set enables to move the floating train at high speed taking advantage of no friction.
    • That technology doesn’t use moving parts.
  • The train travels along a guideway of magnets which control the train's stability and speed.
    • Therefore, Maglev trains are quieter and softer.
    • As the result, the system enables to have much bigger speed than conventional trains and it makes the world’s faster train than ever.
    • In addition, levitation doesn’t need a large energy consumption even with a high speed system, that it seems be an environmentally friendly project.
    • Magelv operates thanks to EMS (ElectroMagnetic Suspension) systems.
    • In fact, the train levitates above a steel rail while electromagnets, attached to the train, are oriented toward the rail below the train.
    • It is arranged on C-shaped arms, with two portions: the upper portion attached to the vehicle, and the lower inside edge containing the magnets.
  • The system is made by one rail situated inside the C, between the upper and lower edges.
    • Maglev vehicles hold the speed record for trains because the trains can accelerate and decelerate much faster than today’s trains.
  • A train can reach 350 km/h in 2 minutes.
  • The maximum normal operation speed is 431 km/h.
    • That way, it is a challenge for the builders to preserve safety and comfort of all the passengers.
    • Due to its cost very expensive, some projects were abandoned particularly in Australia and Germany.
    • If you wanted to try to this experience today, you would get on a Maglev train only in East Asia (China, Japan and South Korea) where that technology is the most expanded.
    • The faster train is the Transrapid in Shanghai.
    • The journey takes only 7 minutes and 20 seconds to complete the distance of 30 km at full speed.
    • Additionally, Japan aims at developing train always faster with SCMaglev, operated in 2027.
    • In a nutshell, Maglev is so fascinating because these trains travel above tracks and rest on air.
    • When you are on board, you feel floated.
    • You see the landscapes scroll rapidly, this experience is really a breathtaking.

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    • Maglev is a system of train transportation, derived from magnetic levitation because it uses two sets of magnets.
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    • Firstly, a set of magnet repels and pushes the train up off the track as in levitation.
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    • FAt firstly, a set of magnet repels and pushepairs, one at the track and one at the train, repels each other and lifts the train up off the track as in levitation.
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    • Secondly, another set enables to move the floating train at high speed taking advantage of no friction.
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    • SAt secondly, another coil set enables to movehe translational motion of the floating train atup to high speed taking advantage of no friction except air resistance.
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    • As the result, the system enables to have much bigger speed than conventional trains and it makes the world’s faster train than ever.
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    • As thea result, the system enables to have much bhiggher speed than conventional trains and it makes the world’s faster train than everhas the potential to get the world’s fastest ground based transport medium.
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    • In addition, levitation doesn’t need a large energy consumption even with a high speed system, that it seems be an environmentally friendly project.
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    • In addition, levitation itself doesn’t need a large energy consumption even withconsume large power -independant from speed; most of it is required to push against air resistance at high speed system, that it seem, and can be recycled at slowing down the train, thus being an environmentally friendly project.
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    • In fact, the train levitates above a steel rail while electromagnets, attached to the train, are oriented toward the rail below the train.
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    • In fact, the train levitates above a steel rail while electromagnets, attached to the train, are oriented towards the rail below the train.
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    • It is arranged on C-shaped arms, with two portions: the upper portion attached to the vehicle, and the lower inside edge containing the magnets.
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    • It is arranged on C-shaped arms, with two portions: tThe upper portion attached to the vehicle, and the lower inside an edge containing the magnets.
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    • Maglev vehicles hold the speed record for trains because the trains can accelerate and decelerate much faster than today’s trains.
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    • Maglev vehicles hold the speed record for trains because the trainsy can accelerate and decelerate much faster than today’swheel based trains.
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    • That way, it is a challenge for the builders to preserve safety and comfort of all the passengers.
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    • That way,Due to that it is a challenge for the builders to preserve safety and comfort of all thefor passengers.
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    • Due to its cost very expensive, some projects were abandoned particularly in Australia and Germany.
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    • Due to its cost very expensive, maintenance some projects were abandoned, particularly in Australia and Germany.
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    • If you wanted to try to this experience today, you would get on a Maglev train only in East Asia (China, Japan and South Korea) where that technology is the most expanded.
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    • If you would wanted to try to this experience today, you would get on a Maglev train only in East Asia (China, Japan and South Korea) where thatis technology is the most expanded.
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    • The journey takes only 7 minutes and 20 seconds to complete the distance of 30 km at full speed.
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    • The journey takes onlytravel duration is 7 minutes and 20 seconds to completefor the distance of 30 km at full speed.
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    • Additionally, Japan aims at developing train always faster with SCMaglev, operated in 2027.
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    • Additionally, Japan aims at developing train always faster with SCMaglev,even faster trains with SCMaglev, which shall be operated in 2027.
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