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How I met the New Year ( Part five)
"Visit me" I talked to her.
At the morning Fatima said to me "I lied you, don't angry.
I don't know James.
When you told me your about your situation I pitied you and invited you to us.
I didn't angry.
It was the best New Years night.
Thus i met the New Year in last year.
And this year i meet the New Year at my place in Siberia with Fatima together.

marsel86January 2018Bầu chọn ngay!
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- How I met the New Year ( Part five)
  Bầu chọn ngay!
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câu 1
- "Visit me" I talked to her.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- At the morning Fatima said to me "I lied you, don't angry.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
câu 3
- I don't know James.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
câu 4
- When you told me your about your situation I pitied you and invited you to us.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
câu 5
- I didn't angry.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
câu 6
- It was the best New Years night.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
câu 7
- Thus i met the New Year in last year.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
câu 8
- And this year i meet the New Year at my place in Siberia with Fatima together.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8