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How I met the New Year ( Part five)
"Visit me" I talked to her.
At the morning Fatima said to me "I lied you, don't angry.
I don't know James.
When you told me your about your situation I pitied you and invited you to us.
I didn't angry.
It was the best New Years night.
Thus i met the New Year in last year.
And this year i meet the New Year at my place in Siberia with Fatima together.

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- How I met the New Year ( Part five)
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- "Visit me" I talked to her.
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문장 2
- At the morning Fatima said to me "I lied you, don't angry.
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- I don't know James.
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- When you told me your about your situation I pitied you and invited you to us.
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문장 5
- I didn't angry.
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- It was the best New Years night.
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- Thus i met the New Year in last year.
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- And this year i meet the New Year at my place in Siberia with Fatima together.
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