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MY LIFE.
- Hello i am luis rodriguez im lives at barranquilla-colombia and have 21 years, i study aircraft technician.
- i want learn english, want speak and hear english here. i know what here i can learn english but now my level english its so low, so help me please :).

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SIUSPLAU, AJUDA A CORREGIR CADA SENTÈNCIA! - English

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- Hello i am luis rodriguez im lives at barranquilla-colombia and have 21 years, i study aircraft technician.
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- Hello iI am lLuis rRodriguez ~~im lives at b~~and I live in Barranquilla-cColombia ~~and have~~. I'm 21 years old, iI study to be an aircraft technician.
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- Hello iI am lLuis rRodriguez im. I live~~s at b~~ in Barranquilla-cColombia ~~and have 21 years, i study~~. I am 21 years old, and I am studying to become an aircraft technician.
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- i want learn english, want speak and hear english here. i know what here i can learn english but now my level english its so low, so help me please :).
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  iI want to learn eEnglish, I want to speak and hear eEnglish here. iI know wthat here iI can learn eEnglish but now my ~~level english its s~~English level is too low, so help me please :).
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