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    • Hello i am luis rodriguez im lives at barranquilla-colombia and have 21 years, i study aircraft technician.
    • i want learn english, want speak and hear english here. i know what here i can learn english but now my level english its so low, so help me please :).

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    • Hello i am luis rodriguez im lives at barranquilla-colombia and have 21 years, i study aircraft technician.
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    • Hello iI am lLuis rRodriguez im lives at band I live in Barranquilla-cColombia and have. I'm 21 years old, iI study to be an aircraft technician.
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    • Hello iI am lLuis rRodriguez im. I lives at b in Barranquilla-cColombia and have 21 years, i study. I am 21 years old, and I am studying to become an aircraft technician.
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    • i want learn english, want speak and hear english here. i know what here i can learn english but now my level english its so low, so help me please :).
      赶紧投票吧！

    • i      I want to learn eEnglish, I want to speak and hear eEnglish here. iI know wthat here iI can learn eEnglish but now my level english its sEnglish level is too low, so help me please :).
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