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A few things about myself
Hello everybody, i'm a 17 years old french girl, and i am here to perfect my english speaking and writing...
- I'd like to talk with boys and girls who are about my age and who speak english by birth...
- I went to England two times.
I love music, but my real passion in life is horse-riding !
And i would be pleased if someone could correct my text or send me a message. Thanks :)

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- A few things about myself
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- Hello everybody, i'm a 17 years old french girl, and i am here to perfect my english speaking and writing...
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
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- I'd like to talk with boys and girls who are about my age and who speak english by birth...
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- I'd like to talk with boys and girls who are about my age and who speak eEnglish ~~by birth~~since they were born...
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  Report as spam?
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- I went to England two times.
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- I whave beent to England tw~~o times~~ice.
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  Report as spam?
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- I love music, but my real passion in life is horse-riding !
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- And i would be pleased if someone could correct my text or send me a message. Thanks :)
  Bầu chọn ngay!
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